All Comments on 'Seeing Her First Time'

by ncinsa

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 9 years ago
1 star, but not because of the subject matter

But if he was experiencing things from her perspective, why would he have Eddies experiences? How us that possible. And in 14 years, he doesn't know she had a tattoo?

Really? So because of the confusion, one star.

ncinsancinsaabout 9 years agoAuthor
re Whackdoodle

So, it's supposed to be that he experiences her memory through someone else in the memory, in this case Eddie, not her. Also, it's not done yet. There will be more parts, but as it progresses, we learn that Eleanor had a very different past from what she lets on, even to her husband. Maybe I should have been clearer with that. I'm sorry for any confusion.

westwood19westwood19over 7 years ago
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Does he use her memories to bring her different thrills for just her birthday? Lookup Eddie for old times? Relive their first dates? Check out other lovers?Have her learn his firsts?

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