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Disposable Hero Ch. 01 Pt. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Sid060403/27/15

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading more of your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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by Anonymous03/27/15

Love it

Looking forward to more

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by Anonymous03/29/15

Woderfull Story, badly written.

I congratulate you for your imagination. The plot is five stars. The development of the story is magnificent. I'd like the installments a little bit longer, but nothing to worry about.

Having said that, your writting is awful, I can hardly understand what you are trying to say. Have you tried to read it, at least once, before posting it? If you cannot find an editor, try to proofread it yourself. I know it is not the best solution, but I'm convinced it'll work for you.

One last thing: Keep writing, please.

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