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The Tides Of War Pt. 05.5

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by Anonymous

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by Sid060403/27/15

What a Great Chapter...

This is a great chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It certainly adds to an already outstanding story and I look forward to reading much more. Easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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by tazz31703/27/15

WAR IS EXCITING TO READ ABOUT

for those participants not so much so. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by ag250703/27/15

Don't mean to be a nudge

But 5.5 after 6? methinks you're counting the wrong fingers, lol

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by WILLAC03/27/15

If my memory of a prrior chapter

is correct they were married at the palace and the prince gave him a ring to give to her as her wedding ring ???

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by redlion7503/27/15

why the step backwards?we already had them on the way back to england didnt we?

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by dinkymac03/27/15

Excellent!!

Keep the chapters coming and thanks for sharing.

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by teedeedub03/27/15

Good

That bridged the gap. I knew something was missing. Plus, one of your best yet...
Thanks.....

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by Anonymous03/27/15

Thank you for the asked-for narrative. Ch. 5.5 was well worth the effort

Six, as it is, makes perfect sense with this solid foundation.

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by Anonymous03/27/15

Unfortunate interruption in story flow, but adds well to the previous and succeeding chapters.

Thanks for taking the time to fill in some missing events and issues. Later readers will appreciate the effort as well.

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by Anonymous03/28/15

Thank you!

Thanks for bridging the gap with another great chapter. I'm looking forward to chapter 7.

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