Sorry, I'm Married

If you admit it's fetish porn...

then why isn't it in that category?

If you don't have the fetish,

Reference the previous post. Why the fuck would you post a fetish story in this category? Thanks for the warning. Didn't read. 1 star for posting it here.

The 1* pretty much says it all..

So much for posting a fetish story in the LW category so you can get more reads. How's that working out for you?

I thought "loving wives" was specifically the category for this. Wait, it isn't? Does this go to "fetish" then?

Automatic 1*

Sorry, I read one paragraph. Also sorry Literotica let this fool post.

I'm very sorry, Anonymous. I will expediently remove all my crap on here, at some point in the future, maybe! Also thanks for top quality critique.

Just another WACC story

Well this may not be everyone's cup of tea...

and they may have not been exposed to wild parties like contained in this tale.. But a lot of us have gone thru a segement of life where this may not have been a normal but did happen... Lets say we had some late nights with a few adult beverages for all.. thanks for the flashbacks ( I think) smiling.

Nice story

Nice tension. Way to keep it high til the very end. Look forward to the next chapter to see where this goes (if there is one).

I don't think this goes to fetish

There are many stories that can go in multiple categories. This one fits in this category as well as fetish. It has a wife who gets involved in extra-marital affairs. That sounds like it fits to me.

sorry my wife and I have been at parties like this but she knew she was married and loved me

if there is enough love and sex in a marriage and a person is not mentally ill, they do not cross the line, nor do they allow others to do so, nor do they drink so much alcohol they are not in control of themselves, my wife liked to drink and in her words I was the one to make sure nothing happened to her since she knew she was not at full control. any sex outside the marriage not only causes emotional risk in a marriage it also put medical risk into the marriage and few rational partners are willing to risk various STDs and HIV with partners that have strayed, it can take months for a positive negative test to be made.

Gross

What a bunch of pigs!!!!!!

Why were they at a party where there were almost exclusively singles? Why was he sitting alone drinking himself silly while his wife was elsewhere flirting with other men? Where was Glen? What did the title have to do with the story? If you think cucking is a fetish then why post in LW? Not really a good story. I really don't think she needed to text for permission, did you?

Not my thing

I'm sorry, too. People fucking when they're reeling drunk is not very stimulating to me.

Potential . . .

. . . not realized. The general plot outline had a lot of possibility in the hands, with the pen, of a competent author. Unfortunately the story is so badly written, poor organization and worse grammar, that is is all but unreadable.

Just the opinion of one.

Another cheating chuckhold wife story

Pictures circulating every wear , plus infidelity you are the laughing stock of all who know you. Stupid story. End of a real marriage.

All the story was based on drunken people...

All the story was based on drunken people...1st - Why married couple go to a singles party? 2nd - He was so drunk, he couldn't stand up, but could easily exchange text messages with his wife? Drunk as he was he wouldn't be capable of doing that...3rd- As soon as he accepted her request to fuck others, she lost all respect she had for him, and from then on this marriage was going to the abyss...4th - at least the other husband was having fun too with some young girl...So this story isn't about cheating or cuckolding, but about people who think that what's funny is to get senseless drunk...1*

You said yourself that this is fetish porn. So why not post in the fetish section? Just curious....

Just another dumbs shit cuckold. Hope Megan finds a man someday to marry.

The wimp she's got now is pathetic. So is the story.

What about him and Kelly

The last paragraph seems tacked on, as if you wanted to deflect negative comments. Too little. maybe if you post a follow up with details, but as is it's just kinda lame.

Sorta a WACC story...

Hubby was a moron. Why wouldn't he go find some young single slut and help the guys gang bang her? His wife what tell him what she did? She made it with some lame threesome? Sorry time for hubby to start screwing his secretary. Just what dies the title "Sorry, I'm Married" have to do with the story? If wifey had remained faithful it would have made sense. But as is she's just a drunk slut. And hubby's a drunk WACC. Nothing erotic in that. And get an editor, and proof read you stuff...

Dung

1* , but the cuckies will love you.

She Knows

Hubby is a wimp, a loser man, likes to watch his wife cheat and she found out that she likes being married to a wimp that lets her party and get banged...what a thrill.

He needs to be single until, and if he gets better, and just date hate party broads so he can enjoy what is his being handled by strong willed Adonis types that take what they want...after all, he is in admiration of their prowess and ability and submissive to their will. Maybe...he should join in the gang bang, eat some cream pie and maybe...suck some guys manhood - bet he would like that. He could pretend to be drunk and unable to stop himself...sure!

appreciate your disclaimer up front

No one-bomb here

Pretty good story over all...

with two slut wives putting out. But you need to do a better job of editing. Too many word usage mistakes. 3 *'s

Thanks for the intro

thanks for just being up front about the nature of the story. I think what drives people mad is that literotica refuses to break this category into more distinct groupings, so people would know what they're going to read. Compound that with a lot of cutesy authors who like the idea of squicking readers, and you get furious comments and anger. Transparency is the answer to hatred in this category. EVERY story should have a blurb specifying whether it's a happy- cuck story, revenge/burn the whatever, hot wife, swinger, whatever.

Hotwives spectacular.

Loved it. 4*

cuck shit

Cuckold have a sexual mental illness ,there are too many cuckold story on here there all same plot, it's boring repetitive garbage. Also like the other guy said HIV is not funny it may take months to show but that's what you get for being a promiscuous slut and the best thing for a slut is chlamydia so she never has children

Wow, previous commenter. Now I'm concerned. I really hope I don't get HIV or chlamydia by posting on Literotica. How do I safeguard myself? Regardless, thanks for the heads up.

Potential

Nice story Andromon. Dont worry about the negative posts. Dont know why the fuck some people come to this site.

A follow up story where your wife gives you the lowdown on what happened would be great as it seemed a bit rushed at the end.

Her side

Could you write a version from her side.

As far as the guy concerned about you getting STD's type with latex gloves works for me lol

Liked it

Nice and concise, but as suggested previously, more detail from her perspective would be good. Best of luck in future writings.

What a pig and she will only get worse. She lied because she said she didn't do anything yet but she gave at least a blowjob already. He also told her ok but tell about it but she held back afterwards. Her friend was not the same because she did her also and how many guys gangbanged her. Nice friends they have and that other pig of a friend is totally out of control. I feel bad for these two dumb husbands . Once a pig always a pig , she's only gonna progress from there, marriage over

The thing that makes me laugh about this story is right at the beginning, where you have the narrator assert his 25 year old wife is a match in looks for girls who are "twenty at best"... as though 25 a year old woman is on the cusp of being an ancient, dusty relic.

Good stuff

Enjoyed it. I agree with some of the comments about "her side". Would have loved to hear from her what happened. Left us hanging.

But a very good yarn..... keep 'em coming!

And don't worry about the negative comments, didn't we learn from Clinton that blowjobs aren't really cheating. LOL

thanks for the caution

I wish more authors would do the same.
Your courtesy is appreciated.

THIS DEFINITELY IS A LOVING WIFE STORY, NOT FETISH! THE AUTHOR REFERRED TO HIS OWN STORY AS PORN, & PORN IT IS. THE WIFE DID ASK THE PERMISSION FROM HER HUSBAND & GOT IT. SHE ARRANGED FOR A 3-SUM WITH A SEXY CHICK.

In the last or 2nd last parafraph the husband realizes that wife has figured out he was getti g a kick out of her escapade (MFM!) His concern is that she will now start sleeping around big time because her husband is a silent partner in all of that.
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Some comments were out to lunch... & then some.
There was a disclaimer that it is a cuckolding porn. Why would you read it? I never watch reality TV because i do not like it.
I have noticed that javmor79 always give balanced comments & he said the story was in the right category. I agree with him.
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Very rushed ending

As a reader, I wanted to hear all the details. As you ate and enjoyed the cream from her stretched married pussy.

Felt Cheated

All that detailed foreplay (which I loved!) and then skipping the part while she confesses what happened inside the house? Not fair!

what happened, what next?

really did enjoy reading your story. But, as others, would've loved to hear HER side of the story, and of what happened after husband's green light!!!
"... it may lead to no good." -> did it?
Please give us the sequel ...

Keep up the good writing

Ending fell short

As observed by others, the ending was disappointing. There's this big buildup to his wife getting fucked, but then you bail on the description. The reader is left with blue balls, unsatisfied. You missed a real opportunity for a very erotic scene. All drunkenness aside, those two guys and his wife were horny as hell and ready to get down to some very serious fucking. You could've had a very erotic threesome going in a bedroom while the husband spied on them.

blow jobs aren't cheating?

She says I never cheated on you but let me do it this one time? She just finished sucking a guy off taking her clothes off in front of a room full of guys, played with dicks, I guess the writers idea of cheating and whoring behavior and mine are different.

Asshole Husband!

Should have gotten his wife out of there LONG BEFORE she started fucking around! That marriage won't last long!

Another cuck!!

Why get married...is it just to be cucked? Your wives are whores and you couldn't get a hard on if your life depended on it... No balls cuck's....there are literally millions of you fucking losers out there. Why don't you all become gay and get it over with????

☆☆☆☆☆- (4.55/5.0 = 91% = A)

I had a strong, pronounced voyeur side which i was not aware of. I was getting voyeur impulses once in a while but i was not yet ready to to admit things to myself.
2 - 3 events when men were too overtly hitting on my wife brought my voyeur side to the fore.

Hmmm

I like the idea of numerous std's lol sick shit 1

What a bunch of crap to vomit to!!! MINUS 5*!!!

Only real cuckold/wimp perverts like such a crap!!!

Random shit !

WTF ? You're a better writer than that. Not even a little believable! Only a 1- cause that's the lowest available. Write to your potential! Sheeesh !

1*

cuck shit.

What's with anonymous?

I'm one here to keep the sick perverts from spamming me, but I don't understand why anyone would read the intro the read the story just to 1-bomb it. I know that Lit does sweeps on votes occasionally, i do wish they'd find a way to bar/bann these assholes from voting, it screws up the scoring so that it becomes useless!

It's clear that some woman or women realized what a worthless little boy she was with and left him for someone with a IQ above s flatline. I'd also bet money these jackasses are incapable of sex more than once a month and then only last until the glans touches flesh, no penetration possibles I think there are actually only three or four of these sorry excuses for males and they orgamsm on each other's reviews always hoping to see something original, something besides 1* click… pathetic!