That Fun New Store at the Mall

what an excellent start

please continue as the girls explore the delights on offer at this fantastic sounding shop

Coming to a Mall near you.

Toys aren't usually my thing but God am I glad I read this. This is without a doubt one of the hottest stories I've read in a long, long time.

Thank you very much

very good

Great set up, fantastical, but not beyond belief, two believable protagonists and some highly erotic action.

More of the same please.

Great stuff!

Thank you lots -- please write more. Five stars.

Great story

I really enjoy your style of writing in this story. The sentences flowed well and the story made sense. Continue writing. Sequel?

very nicely written

this was very enjoyable to read! Thank you.

Excellent Work

I loved it. Characters that you can believe and a situation that was as hot as the surface of the sun. I could SEE Janie and Sondra - very well-described people and positions. Something that many authors skimp on, for one reason or another. There are good reasons why some writers do so, but I'm not one of those.

Definitely a five-star piece.

Someone call me when Inner Haven opens in Sydney

OMFG. Smoking hot, beautiful hetro girls with just a hint of bi - something for everyone!
The machines were creative without being outlandish, and were described with just the right amount of detail so as to tantalise while still letting the reader use their imagination.
I loved the use of erotic language, not a cunt or bitch in sight, and no body-part words were overused. This is hard with girl-x-girl, and more impressively it stays respectful to women throughout. Indeed, the only hint that this was written by a man was the improbable accuracy with which lubed dildos unerringly found the right hole (a rich vein of comedy was sadly missed).

Really hot!

Loved this story - thank you!

I agree!

Others' comments perfectly describe my reactions to the story, So well done!

I cracked up when I read the following:

"She could hear the buzzing through the wall when there wasn't a guy over, and she could hear the choreography when one was. Not to mention that Janey went through D-cell batteries like they were Oreos."

Your character must be using an 'industrial strength' size vibrator; the typical battery sizes are AA or AAA. Think: 'vibrator diameter is determined by battery size'. (Her choice of machines confirms she is a size queen, not sure why she was worried about her bf.)

Years ago, (20+), the ones with divorced power supplies and cords had C's. There is a trend now towards those damned lithium wafer batteries, (damned because there are no rechargeable alternatives and lithium is toxic as hell)

Winner!

Great writing on all levels. So many comments already said what i thought. I really enjoyed this story.

Love it

Always puts me over the edge, my favorite story on here!

OMG! Awesome story

This is an awesome story. Turns me on everytime. They should make a video of this story

Appreciation

Hi everyone,

I certainly appreciate the positive feedback you've given to this story. It's been fun to see.

If you like the story, would you consider voting for it as a 2015 Reader's Choice Award? It's a finalist in this category, and the link is here: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=12868 64

Whether you vote or note, I hope you enjoy the story. I've been pondering a sequel because I kind of like the characters.

fan f**king tastic

Thankyou, that was an amazing, hit the spot perfectly :-D I hope to read more of Janey and Sondra's adventures in the future

beulahthebrit

OMG, this was absolutely fantastic, I think this kind of store should be in every shopping mall in the world, I would never leave. PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE, a sequel is required, there is so much scope to expand both the story and characters in this. Excellent progression and development.

Amazing! My favorite story on this site.

Please can we have more of Sondra and Janey. I'm sure that there are other "experiences" They could try out at Inner Haven before taking things to a new level back home.

I would be a regular customer if theres a place like that.

AMAZING

Are there any other stories like this???? This is the best book I have read to far xx