All Comments on 'Happy Ending'

My fingers are tingling!! I need to give a massage after that. Lovely prose, beautiful atmosphere.

The absence of dialogue is -- for me, at least -- a real mistake. It detracts from the eroticism. "Higher", "Lower", "Faster", "Slower", "Don't tease me", "Touch it", "Again", "Don't stop", "Kiss me", "Kiss it", "Right there", "More", "Again" are just SOME of the things she could have said. And, perhaps, "Are you hard?", "Bring your cock up here", etc.

I gave it 4 stars, but for potential.

I loved this!

If this is based on something real, you need to share him with the rest of us!

I think I'll go get the massage oil and read this again.

I want more!

I want to know what happens next!

I loved this

I'm off to offer a massage and see if I put some new ideas into practice.

I'm hoping there is a part two to this. Very hot.

That was one sexy read. Keep up the good work

I freaking loved this!

Shame you haven't had anything new in ages.

I'd read the fuck out of them!

*****