All Comments on 'The Real Estate Connection Ch. 01'

What more can one say? Eroticism, slow build of storyline, firey passion, plausible characters, climaxes to knock yer socks off ... great story - will now get on and read the follow ups! Thanx

I don't even know where to start! This story is one of the best well written I've read in a very long time!!! A true story, not just a quick fix. Immediatly drew me in, and very realistic! I look forward to continue reading the rest! THANKS!!!

How refreshing to read a truly good story! Kiwi knows how to hook the reader and keep one´s interest alive trough the last line. Excellent work! And of course I will read the other chapters as soon as I can.

How refreshing to read a truly good story! Kiwi knows how to hook the reader and keep one´s interest alive through the last line. Excellent work! And of course I will read the other chapters as soon as I can.

How refreshing to read a truly good story! Kiwi knows how to hook the reader and keep one´s interest alive through the last line. Excellent work! And of course I will read the other chapters as soon as I can.

This has really sucked me in, hope it continues in the same way

reading it for the second or third time and still enyoing it very much

Before anyone gets too involved there is no ending. Might save a few a waste of time.

I have read the whole story But this and his other very similar story are not finished

They link up but are incomplete

Really annoying

loved it

Like the mix of an action story and plenty of hot sex

Good effort, keep going ... but where's the rest - dying to know who the 3 dudes are

This is another incomplete story.

Get an editor. Kiwi vernacular in American South??.

Nice.

If your dick is not to thick, she can breathe while it's down her throat. If it is, she cannot.

What she cannot do under any circumstance, is hum, groan, or anything that needs activating the vocal cords. It's just technically impossible.

Same as when the doctor has a look down your stomach. Once the tube is in after you suppressed the gagging, you can breathe. But you cannot make any sound whatsoever, except stamping your feet or clapping your hands, unless you brought your guitar.

Try it. I did.