Shows the language as Swahili. So much for the India idea. I usually stay away from authors like this because of the language issues but I must admit it's not bad. 3*
The author states he's British on his biography...
and it is evident from the British words (centre, cheeky smile). It really doesn't add anything to have them speaking in a foreign language and translate for the reader. This same interaction goes on around the world between a married woman and her suitor. Just leave the foreign language out, no matter what Google translate says it is, and concentrate on the emotions, the feelings, the smells, the sighs and moans of the forbidden mating. Still gave it 5 *'s, because at least you can write clear sentences.
English
Looking hot
Hot read, hope the other part will be soon. Also like the wife love the nipple attention...
What language is this supposed to be?
And is there any logical reason for using it?
i bet the author's last name is patel.
now cAN YOU GUESS THE LANGUAGE? oops cAPSLOCK. goddamn.
Why is he using that language?
Because he is from India? (The arranged marriage element was a major clue to this.)
You will notice the fact that English and the local language are used in the conversations. This is what happens in India.
This is a 4* star read and I await part 2 with interest. Cuckold stories aren't my cup of tea, but this is well-told.
Google Translate
Shows the language as Swahili. So much for the India idea. I usually stay away from authors like this because of the language issues but I must admit it's not bad. 3*
The author states he's British on his biography...
and it is evident from the British words (centre, cheeky smile). It really doesn't add anything to have them speaking in a foreign language and translate for the reader. This same interaction goes on around the world between a married woman and her suitor. Just leave the foreign language out, no matter what Google translate says it is, and concentrate on the emotions, the feelings, the smells, the sighs and moans of the forbidden mating. Still gave it 5 *'s, because at least you can write clear sentences.
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