Captives of Alien Milkers Pt. 04

Rescue?

Is it going to happen?

So Hot

Your stories hit all the right buttons for me cant wait for the next installment.

Great story! Looking forward to more.

Please Continue!

Don't leave us hanging, please continue!

It can't end here!!

We have to find out what happens next! This is such a good story. It can't end at part 4! And just when we're about to learn what happens behind the curtain O^O

I can't wait for more.

I love the way you write. Please post the next chapter, I'm going outta my mind here!

I'm thankful but surprised to ask...

Great story and it look like much interesting things are waiting for us further.
Thanks!

BUT!

why heroine say in part 3:

"Diana," I said. "My name is Diana."

and she say also in part 4:

"It's okay," I said, helpless in the grip of my own desire. "Call me Denise."

so finally Diana or Denise? )))

Very well written!

Good job on this series! Refreshing to read something well thought out with no spelling or grammar mistakes. Immersive and detailed as well. Can't wait for the next installment.

To Smartmalk

It's two different names because the author is a lazy, shiftless woman who doesn't pay attention where she should. :-/

Better editing needed

Also, hoping part 5 explains why part 4 was necessary. The best stories are internally consistent. The treatment of the women seemed a bit rough and pointless if the goal is milk production.

Please read your own chapters before starting the next.

In the last chapter her name was Diane. Kind of a big difference to Denise. Really takes one out of the story. Makes it difficult to keep reading.