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very good
Though there are a couple of things I would change, I really like this. I said in another post, I don't like the wore 'cunt' and you seemed to use it alot. Especially earlier in the series. I was happy when he and his sister discovered each other again and happier still that there was no awkwardness between mother and daughter. You have make a good story here.
Better than very good.
This story is excellently written, edited and completely original. It is thoughtful, engaging, loving and highly erotic. I will gladly add this to my favorite story and author lists.
Thank you!
Fantastic!
What a wonderful ride this was. Superlative. After chapter five I was looking forward to the next five mentioned chapters, but then realized it was really only going to seven. You ended it well, but...I can see the potential for more since Mommy broke the seal by tasting her daughter. It would be great to experience the intimacy of this loving trio. Just sayin'.
All in all, a great story of true love and lust. The training of Neicey was very hot.
Kudos and thanks!
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