All Comments on 'Under the Moonlight'

I am in envy of this story. I only wish my first time was as this erotic.

I guess this describes how I feel with my man...but their first time, not likely.

Yeah, I liked it a lot, but I think there were a few words that were repeated one too many times (suckled, flesh...); but, other than that, I'd say it as pretty good.

Your story was well-written, and direct. It was a great blend of just enough storytelling with satisfying arousing content. So many authors hit either extreme and they forget that their audience doesn't want to read a novel, nor do they want a just few dirty paragraphs. Yours was a happy medium. Good job.

This should be categorized as Romance. Absolutely superb!

I wish the my first time with the gal i love is like this. I so love her... and i want her to feel great. Keep up the great work

Wish all guys where like this

Great exciting story. Picturing it in my head lead to an instant hard on !! Please write more !!

Very nice... sexy hot and passionate. I loved it.... why not wrote more?