All Comments on 'Gone?'

by elphaba69

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MitchFraellMitchFraellabout 9 years ago

Brings back sad memories of my own 'little' cousin dying. (She was 8 years younger than me.) You always assume that younger family members will always be there, unfortunately not so. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerabout 9 years ago
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I think past tense would have been better choice, but you still did a nice job. Thanks.

chytownchytownabout 9 years ago
Cute***

And oh so true. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nicely done

Very evocative. I'm left with a series of poignant images. Very sad and nicely written.

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