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Enjoyed it
a simple flash tale. Thanks.
Nice
Now that's what you call "Caught red handed."
LMAO
Can't wait to hear the Excuses. But Honey I Only Love You. LOL
Do You Ever Wonder?
Do ever wonder why people cheat? With all the lies and adultery, she clearly had little or no love or respect for her husband. If she had so little love or even respect for her husband why not divorce him? Well, through simple deduction we can get that answer: It is what she got out of the marriage other than the actual relationship with her husband. Most often for a wife that is money and the respect that she gets from her community as a married woman. That is why when a man catches his wife cheating, the best revenge is to take those two things from her; they are all she really cares about. Bleed the funds dry and expose her for the terrible person that she is under her lies. Do it in a way that will last as long as the marriage did.
Great Start
Looking forward to the next chapter.
A good one
It's a shame most of the good ones are told with a single breath!
Praise the Lord!
Kelly has risen from the dead!
*****
A fitting tale for the coming holiday. 😇
3 stars
It would have received 5 stars if it was finished.
Stand up comedy?
This works OK as a joke but is hardly a story.
Good Story
It is a good story as it is written. Nice hook. It's tough to get a different method of the cheater getting caught and this is a nice one. Would I like to see a continuation? Sure, as I tend toward the BTB side of things and would like to see how she gets hers, so to speak, but the story stands alone quite well.
Nice short story...
I wish she would have sent back pictures from Aruba on her cell phone. Maybe it would have given hubby some idea who she was with!
I have to agree with @Twentyseven...
I have to agree with @Twentyseven...This works as a joke...jokes end when the funny part shows up and people don't need to know what happened after...That's a joke...As a joke 3*...But if this was intended as a story, then or will have a part 2 or then is like to read a Vol.I of a saga and the writer never again write the other Volumes...The value of the story is null...1* if it was a story...
Very tightly written (i.e. taut) but
really left us wanting more. How did it resolve? What was the wife doing? With who, etc.
Not really a story, is it?...
...you should have used that meger frame to build up a few characters. No one would react the way shown here. He had every possibility to set up a scenario that would have shaken her and her lover superbly. He didn´t, though. Actually you don´t mention anything of importance or interest. That twist was fine and never read of. Too bad you let the rest of the story die.
good starter
Now what was dear wifey up to?
Short, to the point and 5*, too
Interestingly told.
5 stars
Short and to the point. Loved it.
An Outline
Good outline for the beginning of a story.
Thanks Sharing***
This funny story.
Coulda, Shoulda
Why let Sweetie have 4-5 days of kicks & giggles with her Bull about pulling the wool over Hubby's eyes? When she calls on Wednesday night, let her talk on, then let her know when Kelly's funeral is scheduled! Probably not a lot of nookie THAT night. And if Sweetie stays past the next day, the divorce could be nearly complete by the time she gets back 'home!'
Agree that this is mostly an opportunity for a story.
where is the 2 paragraph?
i must of missed it
disappointing
So much more could have been done with the idea behind this.
As previously commented;
Why let her enjoy the whole time?
Unless to use the time to set-up the divorce?
To hire a PI and document what she did?
So many missed opportunities.
As a flash story, not bad......but a snack when it could have been a full meal.
Good Start...
A good start to a story that has open a door for a more in depth squeal.
Great
A fantastic premise. Can't wait to see how you flesh it out and develop it into a full and complete story
wtf
this is the same exact story. word for word. 1 * because of your shenanigans.
I like it!
I'm usually among the first to launch tirades about where's the rest of your story, but this works for me. What could you do with the aftermath that coul possibly match the monumental feeling of "busted" created when he revealed to her the death of her best friend AND the fact he knew she cheated in one fell swoop. Bravo!
Well done
A brilliant flash story! Well done.
RERUN!!!
This is no different than the original "The Resurrection. Nothing was solved the first time and nothing was solved this time, either. He caught her cheating both times.
just a little addition
As she finished her breakfast and started foaming at the mouth, "too much arsenic dear?"
Caught!
Caught cheating, now if only the husband doesn't wimp out and let the slut get away with it!
THE HEIGHTH OF IRONY
one don't tell one till one makes the statement, like not telling he is sterile till she tells she is PG. TK U MLJ LV NV
Same Story
I thought you were adding to this story...what a shame, opportunity to get rid of the cheating lying bitch wife, married lover revenge?
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