All Comments on 'Reading My Fate'

If that was meant to titilare and tease, you did good and there is no way that is all you have written. PLEASE POST THE REST

Right on the money, dear Cat! I don't know how you do it, but you can build tension like no other. I don't know if my heart can take it!

Woody

Lovely story well written and a good ending!

Omg, you can't stop there! Such a beautiful, slow seduction. There has to be a continuation.

Buzzes like a langorous bumblebee. Excellent. Ended too soon.

OMG! Now I see what all the buzz is about. The anticipation is almost unbearable and obviously a slow burn us readers are enjoying. I am torn between being petrified for them and hoping this was a set up between the daughter and her best friend. Inquiring minds want to know.

Well this has me going can't wait for the next installment, I practically threw my phone across the room.

Kat

now that was so HOT you two need to get your daughter to join in this to she will love it to

You make it so easy to visualize a scene. So easy that the reader can feel the tender touches and inhale the fragrance of arousal. Excellent writing. Even better reading. fantac24

"It would not be like having another affair Cat, it's different when you do something with a woman."

This is so offensive.

Anonymous, why is it offensive?

I am a woman and I wrote it.

The person probably meant it was offensive because "cheating is cheating" no matter the sex of the partner. That being said WHO cares! It had an amazing buildup. There is nothing wrong with s lady in her 40s getting it on with a lady in her 20s...please finish.

This seems to be a sensitive subject in certain quarters right now, to the extent that some of our best authors are receiving one bombs for anything involving going for same sex relationships over hetero ones. No I don't understand the sensitivity either!

An amazingly well told stunningly erotic story - and what a cliffhanger ending!

Thank you.

So deeply erotic please continue

What a great buildup -- the sexual tension was palpable -- and the ending fantastic!

Wonderful, please keep going

Am seriously hoping this story is far from over , grinning . So many routes could be taken . Will be watching for a followup .

This has been incredible. I havent run into a story that follows the younger woman making a move on a older woman with this technique. I'm 23 myself and I imagine there not being a lot of patience, especially in something as sensitive as seducing a somewhat high strung older woman. Please do make a sequel! I like where this is going so far

I wish everybody had the patients to write a wonderful build up! HOT! Well done....more please...Thank you for the time you put into this.

Wow - wonderful story - I now propose to read all your stories

I reckon those anonymous feedbacks following Scatty Sue are by the same person. I wonder why?

Cat

Really enjoyed your story and loved the ending. It's always a pleasure to discover another good writer so I will be reading more of your previous work. A solid 5 stars.

Well leaving it there I hope you plan on a sequel! A shame it wasn't just a bit further along and Sara got to see some of the action so there was no deniability by mom.

Maybe Sara is a dominant like me and will direct the activities now!

Mistress Carrie

Well, I've no fear of my "name" being known. Some folks don't like adultery. I can't say that I like it, either.

But, this is FANTASY, people. Fantasy isn't adultery. Isn't incest. Isn't anal. Isn't most of the categories on this site. Not the REALITY of them.

We live in our fantasies, and perhaps they are a measure of our souls, but we must be judged by our actions, and not by our thoughts.

This is a wonderfully written story, about a powerfully, lovely, gently delivered persuasion - yes, seduction - by someone who obviously has wanted and needed her woman for a very long time.

Brilliant work. What a hell of an ending!!!!

Wow got me all hot and bothered

As ever you write with your own particular voice. I happen to like it. Thank you.

You have excelled yourself with this story Cat. This is one of the best seduction stories i have read in a long time and had everything, beginning with Jodi's slow persuasive seduction, then her gentle exploration of your body, ending with your daughter stood watching you both. I hope you continue with this and that your daughter becomes involved

Nicely written story Cat....I do enjoy all your work...keep writing.

you have such a way with writing, and it keeps us wanting more, love it all, thanks and keep it up, and keep us wet.

You really should finish this story.

Fantastic story ! Need to know how it works out!

Please continue the story.

An oh shit moment.... great story. I can relate to that. Only on the younger lovers angle of it. But I prefer older women.

It's funny that the author was trying to rationalize her cheating. The story was hot, but her morals were garbage. Nice story though, enjoyed it.

If people don’t like stories like this, why read? I loved it. You build up the tension so well.

A nice enjoyable story. Very good description of what takes place.

I just wish there was a bit more to the ending.

"PLEASE" continue the story, it was so captivating and damn sexy"! Loved this, but it ended too quickly! Write more so we can enjoy "all" of it.

Gorgeous story. Dastardly cliff-hanger.

Thanks for sharing. Hope you write forever.

The story was good. It was very descriptive, but seemed to lack any emotional development nor heightened involvement.

Ugh, why was this not continued. T.T