Cocksucker: Master & Mistress

Would be a dream cum true for this to happen to me

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Honestly....I've enjoyed all of your stories except this one..... this is by far your worst story, sorry if you don't like my opinion, 1* for all chapters.

you should have left this shit

In gay male or posted it in fetish.

Liked it very much, but

I liked this series very much, but at the end you probably lost the good ideas that made the early series so funny and sexy to me.

This story

I must echo a comment from another reader, this series was not your best work. There was something missing in these stories, I don't know how to explain what that something was/is, but it was certainly missing. Sorry.

I agree with anon

I would love it if this happened to me. I think this IS some of your best work!!

poor at best

The last chapter ended it all . He did all this because he loved his wife and family and basically she is with another man and having the other mans child. Really bad taste over all. Then your epilogue like everything worked out.
All this for a ring No way.

Last chapter ruined it.

The last chapter basically ruined the entire story.

Great story - weak ending

Up until this chapter, I really enjoyed the saga but this felt rushed and obvious. That said, the fact the wife knew Gary was a clever twist,.

Saw it coming(no pun intended)

Saw the ending coming from chapter 1 but a good story all the same. For those that felt the ending was weak, what did they think was gonna happen? Really, if this ending makes you uncomfortable you shouldn't be reading cuckold stories to begin with.

Author's Note

hi all,
First I couldn't decide what category to put this in...but decided to keep it in Crossdressing because that was one of the themes...could have been gay or loving wives...

Second...as for the ending...it was foreshadowed throughout the chapters.

Lastly, I do appreciate your comments. I struggled on how to end this story....this why it took so long.

Jasmine April 2015

not the ending I was expecting a tame really

loved it

I read each chapter and loved em all

Anticlimax

I figured from the first chapter the wife was in on it, and so coming home to Master and Mistress was what I most looked forward to, but this just felt like a rushed throwaway. There's a page and a half of making it increasingly obvious how it will end, then the actual climax is half a page. I wish Chris spent as much time with his new owners as he did at the drag show or construction site.

Neat story!

I generally steer clear away from gay stories but this story had hints of femdom and cuckolding so I took a look. I have not followed this series previously. Wasn't disappointed as I thought it was a neat story. :)

Contrary to some other readers, I really like how your story endings are not tame with predictable endings. I think how you execute these things is really what matters most which is what you do well. I think you did the femdom/cuckold genre quite well and can't say much about the gay parts as I glossed over it.

I can understand if some thought it was far too short though and didn't really milk the denouement as much as they would like. Personally, I like when the character's realization that things are never going to be the same is the slowest part of the story until they accept their new place in the order of things. It really gives the feel that the story was more than just hot sex and meaningless plots. For example, it would have been torturous if Gary could let Chris stew in his new cuckold status for a full day at work before doing acts on his wife in front of him. Chris could spend a day thinking about divorce papers or going home and getting on his knees to whoever. He would get boners when he got degrading texts instead of be angry and finds out he really does just enjoy giving in to his wife's demands. It's fun when its not an easy choice as it gives a level of suspense in the ending. Just some thoughts.

Honestly, I'm absolutely sure you know what you're doing as a writer SSL so this was just what you had planned for the story from the outset which is perfectly fine. Keep writing and ignore comments like these. :)

very nice

Loved the story and if I were younger would be a cum slut like Chris. Loved it very much.

Loved the whole series

I loved the whole series and even the end was great. While cross dressing isn't my thing, the rest really got to me and I liked the "tame ending" as others have stated... I like that things can end like that and it doesn't have to be over the top! Well done!

Well that was a waste

Something happened to your writing awhile back and your latest stories simply haven't been up to the quality as your earlier postings. This was an example of something that started with potential but, in the end, failed to deliver something worth the time spent to read it. The ending was just disappointing. Not looking forward to future postings.

Loved the Series

Thank you so so much Silkstockinglover. I waited so eagerly for the final chapters, checking Literotica constantly with anticipation. I was not disappointed. You have confirmed me as a devoted fan and Cocksucker. Chris is to me the luckiest man or should I say Gurl alive. I am waiting eagerly for my Gary to take me. I hope your next stories will not be long in cumming. Love Maidpauline

Nice that they didn't break up or her leave him or kick him out. They stayed together. that was surprise ending.

predicable

So predictable his wife would be in on it, i didn't even finish the story that's how predictable it is he submit to her, someone with more imagination please write a story that is out of the box with the ending.

Stinker ending

I love reading your stuff . You have two of my favorite series going in what mom knows... and bedding the babysitter. But this one I have to say was a real stinker. I would have liked it better if he would have shot them both. I am getting so tired of the poor insufficient husband being made fun of.

Great fairy tail (puns intended)

I've spent all morning reading this series and found myself loving it. There's an ability to write things that resonate with other's thoughts and desires - and you have it. I'm about ready to commit myself to being a loyal fan of yours. In retrospect this final chapter was almost obvious - but well written none the less. I suspect you were as turned on during some of the writing as your readers (I) were. Good work!

FUCKING PATHETIC

Firstly I wouldn't have bought him a drink at the airport, Secondly I would have found out that my wife was pregnant and that it wasn't mine, Thirdly I would drive a hammer through his fucking skull and quietly dispose of the body, and lastly I would divorce my wife and leave her with nothing just that bastard baby. Much better story.

K Jay

Fun series

I enjoyed this series... My only critiques... Sometimes Chris's inability to resist and his all-in attitude seemed a bit forced. And the "innocent" phonecalls with his wife went a bit too far, definitely foreshadowing the ending. And finally, the yadda yadda reference to piss was a bit over the top and, in my mind, unnecessary.

But still, it's almost as if the author dove in to my brain and transcribed my innermost, raunchiest fantasies. I was rock hard every moment I spent reading. We'll done!

Great Series - to Naysayers - you start writing if you think you can do better

It was a great series, I saw glimmers of him leading him and as it got to final 2 chapters I felt wife was in on the fixing....but it was to a purpose to get him where he was meant to be and loved being...the cuck that loved a dick to suck and up his ass, they accommodated him and now they are all happy. Her with the big dick, the man with the hot fucking wife, and the husband as a twink loving to suck dicks and get his asspussy fucked regularly. hanks for a great series - ell you critics to either write something themselves or Fuck OFF! Kisses and Hugs. One of my most favorite writers and stories.

I Love It!

One of my favorites! I only wish it was me that was married to that woman! I want to be a sissy cuckold.

Good ending

Not as a criticism, but I felt there were subtle clues the wife was on in it throughout the first few. The ending did not feel at all out of the blue, but something you built towards and that excused his whorish behavior. Great story.

Love this story

This was so hot it made me cum hard in my hand -- and I ate it all up !!! I too am a sissy CD husband who wants his wife to be my mistress. I service many men regularly and I'm a sissy bitch for all of them. I'm going to show my wife Laura (yes, same name) this story and hopefully she'll agree to be my mistress and fuck me regularly while I'm sucking a real cock -- while she watches.

What a series!

I loved this series. All the stories got my dick leaking in my panties and me craving cock. You know a good writer when they can illicit that kind of reaction from a reader. Well done!

A Wonderful Story of Self Discovery

I loved this series, it was brilliant, my stomach was a knot when he arrived home, just what excellent writing does to the reader. Thank you

Good story

Loved the ease with which Chris changed from a straight guy to a full on slut.
Cannot say I was surprised by the ending, I saw it coming from the moment Gary took the ring, the fact was confirmed for me during the first conversation between Chris and Laura. Please do not think that I am being over critical of your work. It was actually a wonderful story and I stayed hard from beginning to end wishing something like that would happen to me, but I do read quite heavily both erotica and mainstream literature, so I spotted it quickly.

Great job.

Son denies being gay and moves in with mom.

The confusion of the boy's sexuallity takes a turn when mom asks her son if he is gay. The mother presses the boy for answers. The mother only hopes that the boy isn't. The mother asks about his sex life. The boy says that he isn't very good looking and has trouble with girls. So the concerned mother gives the boy much needed advice. She starts to dress provocatively. She wears short skirts and high heels along with expensive pantyhose. The mother only wants to be helpful to her son. He noticed that Mom's apparel is nice looking and compliments her. "Thanks son, I thought I would look pretty for your Dad. He has a intense fetish for her wet panties and pantyhose. The mother finds out and she offers the wet and pretty panties and pantyhose for the boy's enjoyment. "I don't mind if you want to use my things son". She liked the attention she got walking around in the high heels as they made a clicking sound. This aroused the mother and her son. The situation got heated as the mother's demand for the sons attention increased. The mother was obviously using her vibrators and the boy heard the buzzing. The mother increased the process of persuading the boy to use her pantyhose and panties to wear and sniff. The mother finally found the perfect solution. The boy was now using adult movies and relieving himself.