It's an OK short story but it was spoilt by grammatical and spelling errors. If you can't 'proof-read' it yourself, then get some assistance from an editor or other author on here. Keep writing though and good luck.
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OK short story. Get some help though.
It's an OK short story but it was spoilt by grammatical and spelling errors. If you can't 'proof-read' it yourself, then get some assistance from an editor or other author on here. Keep writing though and good luck.
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