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A Match for the el Maiens Ch. 00: Prologue

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by yesterdays04/09/15

wonderful start

This seems like a richly imagined erotic novel of epic proportions. I love the luxurious and polished descriptive language. The world, as well as the characters, both seem vivid and real. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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by Anonymous07/20/15

Bought A Match for the el Maiens on B&N

Loved the book. I am glad you are redoing it. I hope you also republish the other stories in the Trossian series. I would really would like to read them. The names really do need to be clarified but you must keep the surprise, it was so unexpected but hilarious.

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