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The Addition of Lillian Ch. 1

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/10/04

Absolutely wonderful

Loved it, loved it. Wonderful story. One of my favorites as far as pace and descriptive quality.

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by Gus Aspar10/11/10

wow!

Well, surely, we will meet Lilian again...?

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by davemacker05/28/13

Points of view

I enjoy reading stories like this, that are largely from a female point of view. I did not enjoy that the story was written to James who was a main character in the story and would there fore already know the story. With the way you sometimes throw in a little of Lillian's perspective I think it could have been better written as if you were telling someone the story who wasn't there.

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