All Comments on 'Pol Science Ch. 01: The Proposal'

NOD, I am impressed at the singular promise as you develop this storyline.

Major.unedited errors too distracting.

I like the concept of the protag with the bold voice being married off to the man with none. Could go all sorts of interesting place, especially with her possibly having to speak for him in parliament. I'll go check out CH 2. :)