by rcward
The buildup in this story was so hot that I almost felt like I would come without even touching myself. But I was a bit disappointed with what little there is after her first orgasm. She didn't even get to feel him entering her? But that's the best part! Nevertheless, it hardly mattered for me in the end, I was so worked up by the time the story got there. Well done (despite your hilarious "unfixed" bits ;)). I can't wait to read more.