All Comments on 'I Do Mind Pt. 01'

by rcward

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Hmm...

You didn't FIX THIS much, did you?

rcwardrcwardabout 9 years agoAuthor
Ha

Knew I was forgetting something =)

greenlea77greenlea77about 9 years ago
whew!

Very hot. Can't wait to read more! Thank you :)

midnightsmidnightsabout 9 years ago

The buildup in this story was so hot that I almost felt like I would come without even touching myself. But I was a bit disappointed with what little there is after her first orgasm. She didn't even get to feel him entering her? But that's the best part! Nevertheless, it hardly mattered for me in the end, I was so worked up by the time the story got there. Well done (despite your hilarious "unfixed" bits ;)). I can't wait to read more.

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