Alex's Feminization

Waiting for a sequel

Please continue...this was amazing!! maybe Mr Nelson could make Alex call him daddy??

so dirty , i love it , i cant wait for the next episode .

Very Sexy

Great story so far - good scene setting and description. Loving the domination and power of Mr Nelson.......and really hope he chooses a sexy pair of high heels for Alex in part 2

So wonderful

Such a wonderful story, brings back so many memories, please keep it going!

Joanne
XOXOXO

Great story

I love this. I had a similar issue with my body growing up (minus the butt issue, lol). I might've began my transition earlier if someone like this could've helped me find what I wanted. I hope you write more :)

Tropetastic

Just about every forced femme cliché all in the first paragraph.

So bad I'm still laughing!

When Mr. Nelson put his dick in Alex's mouth, Alex responded like anyone would, being forced to commit such a lewd and nasty act. He bit Mr. Nelsons dick nearly off. It cracks me up that when authors write about some guy being forced to swallow another dick that it doesn't cross their minds that the guy might actually BITE down on the invading member. The human jaw creates a lot of pressure. Chewing a dick off would be child's play. Dumb story.

a good start

I wish I had someone like Mr. Nelson I would love to be someones maid.

keep up the work and pls continue the story.

loved it

dont let he haters bother you cuz I want to see many more chapters.

Wonderful start to hopefully a long saga

I can't wait to hear what Mr Nelson gets our poor Gurl doing in the next chapters .. thanks for writing it xx

Steffie H

Loved it

Oh to be a maid One of my fantasies. Cindy.

dress me

Would love to be put Alex's place can't wait till he looses is cherry and finds out who he really is. Love it. Tom/Tami

A Part 2?

I want to see Alex's transformation, and how feminine will he be for Mr. Nelson. My fantasy is to have a man like him transform me into his trophy girl with blonde hair, and nice big tits (That my body would allow me to get) to be his kept girl.

Very Good Start

Loved how descriptive you were and it was very erotic

This depicts rape

The titular character comes to a reasonable agreement about working to repay the neighbor for repairs to a car after an accident. The driver should realistically have been more careful in a residential neighborhood to avoid pedestrians. Someone with Alex's build could have easily been a child. Instead of making good with the agreement, the neighbor forces Alex to wear clothing against his will, under threat of pressing charges, then continuously encroaches on and violates Alex, finally raping Alex by forcing him to perform oral sex on the neighbor. While you have a nice set up for an erotic story, the pay off is rape, which is not sexy at all, finally ending in forced consumption of ejaculate.
Ideas for revision are that Alex works late and gets so dirty and tired that the neighbor offers to have him take a shower and stay over for dinner. Alex then has his clothes washed and is offered the daughter's clothing to wear. Then he enjoys the meal and is relaxing on the sofa, having a drink, and begins to feel sleepy. The neighbor carries him to a bed, and Alex wakes refreshed the next morning, surprised to see himself looking like a girl. He is tasked with making breakfast for himself and the neighbor, and afterward, has to wash the dishes. Dropping one, Alex finds himself crying a bit. The neighbor soothes him and as he relaxes in the neighbor's strong arms, and consensual sexytimes unfold from there.