Wife's Work Friends Pt. 01

Horribly Written

The story is ludicrous, the grammar is pathetic, and the dialog is so bad that it is hard to read. The spelling is atrocious. It's great that the author is exercising his creativity, but writing is a craft. Put some effort into using spell check, avoid mixing past and present tense unless writing a flashback scene, and brush up a little on grammar and structure.

I liked it

ignore the anon comment. all anons are not worth the words they speak. looking forward to part 2

Fun start

I hope you keep writing this story. It was a great start.

Proofread!!

Grammar and spelling are horrible - completely turned me off. I couldn't even finish it. Please proofread and your stories might be better.

Can't wait for part 2, great start. :)

Very juvenile

This story seems to be nothing but a fifteen year old boy's fantasy. Double team two blondes, fuck a lesbian whose with your wife, have all the cool cars, and of course, spelling like a fifteen year old.

we need part 2

And don't bother with stupid comments ! At last you're sharing something !
Keep it up