Yes!! Nice little flash story. The reality? Not so much. The attitude? Absolutely!! How many court screwed husbands pray for a day like today? Most likely never will happen, but one can only hope. Thanks for posting.
It shouldn't have taken 11 years to sort out a corrupt judge and lawyer colluding to defraud a claimants case.
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Anonymous04/06/15
WAY TO GO!!!!!
Great story! I love it when a plan comes together. More bitches that use the courts to rape and rob a poor defenseless husband should be treated this way. More robber attorneys and morally corrupt judges should be run out of town and disbarred.
This story is depressing but has the ring of truth to it. All young men should red this before they walk into an all too common trap.
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Anonymous04/06/15
interesting but dead exwives get nothing
surprising how fast drug overdoses kill people
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Anonymous04/06/15
Sounds good but unbelievable tale
Not much here, a bad judge a whore wife sleeps with her attorney, yet he is poor and able to get them removed and disbarred. Paying for 11 years no DNA. He could have left town and hung her out to dry, or hired a couple of goons to put the fear of God into her.
at one comment they said it was unbelievable and what was your first clue read the rest of the stories written by sick fucks how believable are they, great story, good laugh.
Good story...but in that city there wasn't one honest law man...A story about a man that has to work all his adult life to support a cheating wife and her bastard son, it's a way to ridicule the laws concerning divorce, laws that determine that the husband is always fucked up, even if the wife is the worst bitch and whore in the state. That's how I understood this one...3*
We always read about everything that led up to the divorce and the split afterward. But seldom does anyone follow up to when the gravy train is over...!
Not really any winners in this story. Is it a BTB story? No. Did he burn her down? No, not really. He had to pay for her lifestyle for ten plus years. It was more like the end of a nightmare for the ex husband. The end of a 21 year long bad dream.
The problem isn't the way the courts treated him, it's the idea that everyone involved from the judge, the lawyer and the doctor were all corrupt. One I could believe but all 3? That's too unlikely..
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Anonymous04/06/15
A 4?
I guess well told, but so far outside of reality that it needs to be in the "fantasy" category.
Eric was too talkative. Now I like to tell a talkative story, but this was Eric's big moment, he should have let his little ex-nubbin do all the asking and he could play the laconic Spartan. I mean; let her figure it out. That would have been so much more fun.
Most of the time I like stories that give the male protagonist some advantage. Sometimes I like even those that make the female/wife side so dramatically worthless that any negative consequence for her is morally all right and fair. Maybe it is my mood today or the bad and good in the story was so far outside any possibility this story was painful in reading. It was as though someone was hammering on the Liberty Bell while a strong 3some held my head in the center. As they hammered the crack kept getting bigger until the sound became so dissonant it finally exploded my head. No one is that bad as the ex in the story nor is anyone that long suffering from the legal system. Hell even the idea of paying everything for the kid tell 21 suffers from the adulthood being reached at 18. Court may say pay tuition till then if he continues to make academic progress toward degree. Same thing for the wife. Give me more real people not fairy tales for males who have been hurt by ex wives and the system.
Wow, he has gone through hell for 10 years and has been helpless. Now, suddenly everything is going his way? The judge has been bounced out, her attorney is being disbarred, and his son is turning 21, which alleviates his responsibility for the little worm. It does seem to be a great day. Everything his ex tries is cut off neatly, without recourse, kind of like it was for him.
Overall I liked it because it was a pure revenge story. But I don't want to look at it too closely because it isn't too close to reality. As a flash story for the purpose of revenge it was very good.
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Anonymous04/06/15
dumb story
Wow. And the point of the story is? Did somebody have a mean mommy or something? Such anger.
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Anonymous04/06/15
5*****
The good scene when the wronged part gets the redistrobution!
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Anonymous04/06/15
Maybe this should have been under Satire
It's too over the top for an effective BTB story. As one person pointed out, it’s more than a bit much that EVERYBODY involved but him was incompetent or corrupt. As a result it was more of a farce than anything else.
Cpete great story loved it. And for those of you shitting on the veracity do some research. There was a case in TX where a guy had to pay support on 3 kids that weren't his because the kids because the family court judge sided with the ex-wife who said they had a relationship with him all their life and considered him their dad". No fault divorce was passed to support the feminist agenda and it's working, ask any military member ( m/f) whose spouse leaves them for any reason and they get half. I had to pay CS for two of my kids until 23 y/o if they went to college or they graduated. it stopped at 18 y/o if they did go to college but had to go back to court and pay for it. The court system is pro-feminist and punishes the male period! That's not saying if the guy is a cheating bastard he doesn't deserve it, but it's still biased toward females so justice isn't balanced. The only reason my cheating whore of an ex wife didn't get shit was because I threatened to expose her cheating. I did an uncontested divorce that took a while but by the time it went before a judge it met the waiting period and it was done that day...much to her chagrin. No one wins in divorce and I have sworn off the institution of marriage but make no mistake about it, the scales of justice in family court lean way toward females...cheaters or not.
Wifey poo is lucky the Man didn't take her for a one way boat ride. Great to have a day of retribution. My only critique is that she and her dope smoking lovers probably trashed the house so it will need money and time to get it ready to market.
He's not a "turnip" anymore! What a sweet feeling that is. I only wish I didn't speak from experience. I'd give this one 10 stars if they'd let me.
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Anonymous04/07/15
Damned Good
An encapsulation of every bit of revenge imaginable.
I loved it.
Thank You
HP
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Anonymous04/15/15
Phoenix rising from failed love
Encapsulation of all the woes that the vultures of the divorce process throw a faithful husband's way is amazing. The precipice of survival and beginning to live again is captured. Divorce is a sad business and no one wins. The legal profession has really nicked up in this area and it is broken above and beyond. This story was expertly prepared to show a particular point of view quite dramatically and expertly. Thank you for your apparent five star effort!
But the sad reality is, that there are still more 'Judge Reynolds' sitting in family court, than not. The only difference is, that, unlike this story, in reality the good guy rarely wins.
That's why I enjoyed this one, even more!
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Anonymous12/25/15
Pathetic revenge fantasy of an impotent loser
Not the way it works, not the way it should work, not the way it ever will work. Sad.
And some people wonder why I say it's easier and cheaper to just kill the cheating slut of a bitch than go through the agony of getting raped in a divorce!!!!!
Read it again. Hard to believe the stupidity of people. Makes you wonder how they can even stand upright. Oh wait. The cunt wasn't that stupid. She had to fuck everyone involved in the court system to get her way. She did, however, forget the day it was all to end. Bye cunt. Take your dipshit son with you.
Courts only benefit those that work in them. All too often, the decisions that are made in court are about making the judges life easier and the lawyers more money. Best to avoid courts.
English
Not up to your usual standard.
Way too one sided. Her and her son are 100% bad, and he is 100% good? I didn't care for this one at all. Just to cut and dry, good vs. evil.
This Was Hilarious
Yes!! Nice little flash story. The reality? Not so much. The attitude? Absolutely!! How many court screwed husbands pray for a day like today? Most likely never will happen, but one can only hope. Thanks for posting.
Hmmmmn.
It shouldn't have taken 11 years to sort out a corrupt judge and lawyer colluding to defraud a claimants case.
WAY TO GO!!!!!
Great story! I love it when a plan comes together. More bitches that use the courts to rape and rob a poor defenseless husband should be treated this way. More robber attorneys and morally corrupt judges should be run out of town and disbarred.
THIS TALE LENDS CREDENCE TO NUMEROUS CLICHES
the Bridges, don't piss off people on the way up, but the best If I could just be there when the shit hits her fan and you are. TK U MLJ LV NV
Liked it...
...and laughed my head off, Nice. 4*
a masterpiece
Best damn story on this site for a long time. Thanks
Oh Yeah
Nice. Just what the fucking cunt and her jerkoff son deserve. Eleven years? Way too long. Now their true life starts.
Depressing but Accurate
This story is depressing but has the ring of truth to it. All young men should red this before they walk into an all too common trap.
interesting but dead exwives get nothing
surprising how fast drug overdoses kill people
Sounds good but unbelievable tale
Not much here, a bad judge a whore wife sleeps with her attorney, yet he is poor and able to get them removed and disbarred. Paying for 11 years no DNA. He could have left town and hung her out to dry, or hired a couple of goons to put the fear of God into her.
LOL. Loved it.
Great story of just desserts.
i laughed
at one comment they said it was unbelievable and what was your first clue read the rest of the stories written by sick fucks how believable are they, great story, good laugh.
Good story...but...
Good story...but in that city there wasn't one honest law man...A story about a man that has to work all his adult life to support a cheating wife and her bastard son, it's a way to ridicule the laws concerning divorce, laws that determine that the husband is always fucked up, even if the wife is the worst bitch and whore in the state. That's how I understood this one...3*
EXCELLENT!!!
Revenge is a dish best served cold!
Nice!
Thanks for sharing.
Nice one!
We always read about everything that led up to the divorce and the split afterward. But seldom does anyone follow up to when the gravy train is over...!
*****
Nice pay raise.
Who bought the Mustang? 😉
Good flash story.....
Not really any winners in this story. Is it a BTB story? No. Did he burn her down? No, not really. He had to pay for her lifestyle for ten plus years. It was more like the end of a nightmare for the ex husband. The end of a 21 year long bad dream.
Another 5*story,
And one based on truth, I think?
I gave it 3 stars but I wanted to give more.
The problem isn't the way the courts treated him, it's the idea that everyone involved from the judge, the lawyer and the doctor were all corrupt. One I could believe but all 3? That's too unlikely..
A 4?
I guess well told, but so far outside of reality that it needs to be in the "fantasy" category.
Great story, only one remark...
Eric was too talkative. Now I like to tell a talkative story, but this was Eric's big moment, he should have let his little ex-nubbin do all the asking and he could play the laconic Spartan. I mean; let her figure it out. That would have been so much more fun.
Still fun though.
oh crap
Most of the time I like stories that give the male protagonist some advantage. Sometimes I like even those that make the female/wife side so dramatically worthless that any negative consequence for her is morally all right and fair. Maybe it is my mood today or the bad and good in the story was so far outside any possibility this story was painful in reading. It was as though someone was hammering on the Liberty Bell while a strong 3some held my head in the center. As they hammered the crack kept getting bigger until the sound became so dissonant it finally exploded my head. No one is that bad as the ex in the story nor is anyone that long suffering from the legal system. Hell even the idea of paying everything for the kid tell 21 suffers from the adulthood being reached at 18. Court may say pay tuition till then if he continues to make academic progress toward degree. Same thing for the wife. Give me more real people not fairy tales for males who have been hurt by ex wives and the system.
Finally is right
Wow, he has gone through hell for 10 years and has been helpless. Now, suddenly everything is going his way? The judge has been bounced out, her attorney is being disbarred, and his son is turning 21, which alleviates his responsibility for the little worm. It does seem to be a great day. Everything his ex tries is cut off neatly, without recourse, kind of like it was for him.
Overall I liked it because it was a pure revenge story. But I don't want to look at it too closely because it isn't too close to reality. As a flash story for the purpose of revenge it was very good.
dumb story
Wow. And the point of the story is? Did somebody have a mean mommy or something? Such anger.
5*****
The good scene when the wronged part gets the redistrobution!
Maybe this should have been under Satire
It's too over the top for an effective BTB story. As one person pointed out, it’s more than a bit much that EVERYBODY involved but him was incompetent or corrupt. As a result it was more of a farce than anything else.
Awesome
Great job, ***** stars!
@Dumb Story
You've obviously never been through the divorce mill and the Feminist legal system.
Guys get fucked! Period! Maybe not as bad as described here but we do get FUCKED!
Loved it.
Funny***
Thanks.
Really?? Not Possible....Bullshit
Cpete great story loved it. And for those of you shitting on the veracity do some research. There was a case in TX where a guy had to pay support on 3 kids that weren't his because the kids because the family court judge sided with the ex-wife who said they had a relationship with him all their life and considered him their dad". No fault divorce was passed to support the feminist agenda and it's working, ask any military member ( m/f) whose spouse leaves them for any reason and they get half. I had to pay CS for two of my kids until 23 y/o if they went to college or they graduated. it stopped at 18 y/o if they did go to college but had to go back to court and pay for it. The court system is pro-feminist and punishes the male period! That's not saying if the guy is a cheating bastard he doesn't deserve it, but it's still biased toward females so justice isn't balanced. The only reason my cheating whore of an ex wife didn't get shit was because I threatened to expose her cheating. I did an uncontested divorce that took a while but by the time it went before a judge it met the waiting period and it was done that day...much to her chagrin. No one wins in divorce and I have sworn off the institution of marriage but make no mistake about it, the scales of justice in family court lean way toward females...cheaters or not.
Five star story
Wifey poo is lucky the Man didn't take her for a one way boat ride. Great to have a day of retribution. My only critique is that she and her dope smoking lovers probably trashed the house so it will need money and time to get it ready to market.
A bit much!
Yeah, a flash story has to make the point without a lot of nuance. But why not just give her fangs and AIDS, since her bastard has ADD?
3*
Funny. Not very good, but funny. Thanks for that.
Not poignant nor rich enough for a good flash story, and too cute and contrived to be taken seriously. But good for a laugh. Thanks.
Retarded confirmed
Realy he waste twelve years with this.
Delightful Romp
Who needs reality. This is fun. Though it is in the wrong category.
an all in one
every possible abuse found in the divorce industry included in a satirical romp.
alright!
He's not a "turnip" anymore! What a sweet feeling that is. I only wish I didn't speak from experience. I'd give this one 10 stars if they'd let me.
Damned Good
An encapsulation of every bit of revenge imaginable.
I loved it.
Thank You
HP
Phoenix rising from failed love
Encapsulation of all the woes that the vultures of the divorce process throw a faithful husband's way is amazing. The precipice of survival and beginning to live again is captured. Divorce is a sad business and no one wins. The legal profession has really nicked up in this area and it is broken above and beyond. This story was expertly prepared to show a particular point of view quite dramatically and expertly. Thank you for your apparent five star effort!
This story always makes me smile
I have read this at least 20 times, and I always smile when I do. LOL.
Medeval poetry. LMBO
Too funny.
I know it's 'Tongue in cheek'
But the sad reality is, that there are still more 'Judge Reynolds' sitting in family court, than not. The only difference is, that, unlike this story, in reality the good guy rarely wins.
That's why I enjoyed this one, even more!
Pathetic revenge fantasy of an impotent loser
Not the way it works, not the way it should work, not the way it ever will work. Sad.
And some peoplw wonder why......
And some people wonder why I say it's easier and cheaper to just kill the cheating slut of a bitch than go through the agony of getting raped in a divorce!!!!!
Ha
Read it again. Hard to believe the stupidity of people. Makes you wonder how they can even stand upright. Oh wait. The cunt wasn't that stupid. She had to fuck everyone involved in the court system to get her way. She did, however, forget the day it was all to end. Bye cunt. Take your dipshit son with you.
No Justice
Courts only benefit those that work in them. All too often, the decisions that are made in court are about making the judges life easier and the lawyers more money. Best to avoid courts.
I Would Rather Commit Murder
...than be raped by the courts!
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