by Creamer
In ch2 she calls brendan, David's little brother. It should be Steve's little brother.
Also in ch2 it reads that he is driving his mercedes, but elsewhere in this chapter he is driving a caddy.
it seriously needs editing and proofreading. A far cry from the well edited Ch. 01. Thanks, anyway.
Building up, building up, wanna see what happens next, so I will. As soon as got the time. Thanks for this chapter too :)
I'm loving this! You're sense of humor is sick and depraved, in a really GOOD way. And strange to say, the story strikes me as pretty realistic, though none of the geeks I've had sex with have been quite so successful. But it's always nice to fuck a guy with a brain! Looking forward to the rest!
Still gets the high marks. Always nice to see the nerd get his revenge on the head cheerleader.
Hey, I tried but obviously this is a story for the perpetually adolescent to enjoy.
Buh-bye!