by LadysMan
I like watching the tension build as they tease each other, getting closer until... YES!
My cousin Sherri had a child not too long ago. She is with her husband still unlike in the Mistaken Identity stories. Out of all my cousins though Sherri is the one I would fall for the deepest. If she was not my cousin I would have married her. She was just my type of woman in looks, attitude and overall fun. I miss her, but realize things had to end.
This story needs to be continued. There is so much more that could be told about those two.
I'd love to read another story about them, or maybe Mike's interactions with Kathleen :)
Wonderful story. Great lead up to the climax, though the final coming together of your characters is a bit lack luster. The passion is implied well, but it seems a bit rushed. Excellent writing. Keep up the good work.