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Quite excellent!
I'm not really into girl on girl, and the two story lines clashed with each other a bit, but overall, a hot little read. Keep this up. Bravo!
A Good story but....
This story belongs in the nonconsent/reluctance group, as she was kidnapped and being forced into this "lifestyle". She is not giving, it is being taken from her.
Good but a bit short
Good storyline but each episode maybe needs to be longer to confirm the momentum well created.
Nice start
I usually like stories like yours however, I'm really turned off by you taking such a nice gal down the road to serve whomever. Keeping it a lesbian theme, yes. But forcing her to have sex with others, nope. Lost my interest.
WTF
Jane seems to be a torture queen and a brutal bitch at that. Take someone's life away, blackmail them, then beat them if they don't comply. Pitty someone doesn't find Jane the bitch in a dark secluded place and use a bat or tire iron to "re-arrange" her pathetic ass, then empty a clip into her to finish the job. I gave this story a chance through 3 chapters, but the direction this is going just isn't for me. I'm done!
Quite exciting
Mostly, I'm enjoying the story so far. It has considerable potential and I shall continue to read it. Too early to decide if I'm going to read all the chapters, let's see where it goes next.
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