All Comments on 'Heaven in the Desert Ch. 03'

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redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

fadil is going to be a problem

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Love it more more!!!

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 9 years ago

Ghaniyah need to go and kidnap some more women for Fadil.

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 9 years ago
I have...

...waited for this and was not disappointed by the intelligence, description, charm and imagination in this piece. Hope to keep seeing more soon. :) 5 stars.

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIabout 9 years ago
5 stars!!!

I love that she is making him work for it. I love that she is an independent spirit and an independent woman wanting her own. He will respect her more for it. I hope she comes up with something grand in the lab to help his people! Can't wait to read the next installment! Good work chica!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
WoW

2 things 2 say.

It was definitely worth the wait.

Now, where is the rest. I want more & I'm sure I speak for those others who read the story

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 9 years ago
Aaryan and Ariana

I love this couple they are so cute together. I am excited to read more about this family and more importantly this couple.

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