Brownwood: I Dreamed Ch. 01

Very promising start

Please don't rush this

Interesting start

Very good start, lots of directions you can go with this story.
DG

HIGH SCHOOL REUNIONS

the bane of all young adults. TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent Openers

An interesting situation and fascinating characters. As in all of your stories.

slut

It's tough not to listen to your heart, but as soon as she wanted to date others when they started college, the writing was on the wall. She was the good time had by all. She was not marrying material.

Even though Bree is a much bigger asshole than he is

Zach still needs to grow a pair. Not liking any of these characters

Don't bother reading any further. It turns into a WACC reconciliation railway, where he naturally comes to understand why everything was really all his fault, and he's the one who needs to apologise and take a knee.

Funny

Author says it's a "dark romance" and it's posted here in the ROMANCE section and some readers are surprised there's a reconcilliation? Really? Almost all romance stories on here have a HEA (Happy Ever After) ending!

Thought it was good and well written. Definately had that dark Loving Wives flavour about it though.

Bree

If she even TRIES to talk to him, he should tell her, "Stay away from me, you CUNT!"

Bree

was twenty two. Zach was twelve!!

Not Realistic

No college guy would bother with a flighty party girl. He just move on to some other coed. 3*