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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/12/15

More please

Can we get some more of this duo please?

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by Anonymous04/12/15

Yes, more please! Continue the show!!

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by Anonymous04/12/15

More true than ficticous

As I have aged and enjoyed candid conversations with close friends and relatives, I find a lot of them have partaken in the forbidden fruits or lament having had the opportunity in the past without doing so. I have one set of close friends (brother/sister) that now live together as older man/wife...she reverted to her maiden name! Both have children from prior marriages and the children seem to be ok with things.

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by Anonymous04/12/15

Great beginning

I sure would love for you to carry on this great story and tell the rest of the tale of their online shows , plus how they became lovers that couldn't live apart from each other.
You could also include that they let their perants know about their love affair and that they want to be together for life.

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by Anonymous04/12/15

Sequel Please

Please write about that shower and the next couple of shows.

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by Epiphany_Jones04/12/15

It can't end here, can it?

You've set the stage, and even included a teaser. I definitely would like to read more about the siblings and what they get up to.

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by hoosierrebel7604/12/15

Excellent

I agree, bring on the sequel!

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by erwangers04/12/15

More please!

Agree with the others, more please!

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by Rawmaster5004/12/15

Hot and Sexy

I am with the others who want more. He needs to get into her ass instead of a dildo.

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by sabra1602304/12/15

MORE MORE

Good story keep it cuming. Thanks

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by Wmsraub04/12/15

un fucking believeable

More please

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by Anonymous04/12/15

Great story

Very well written,,,,,kept me interested and wet,,,,,thanks

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by Anonymous04/12/15

Great stuff!

Great stuff as usual... hopefully there are more chapters to come!

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by Anonymous04/12/15

hot hot hot!

Great story!

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by Anonymous04/13/15

Darn good!

At least one sequel would be good, if you want to, of course. No suggestions, I'm sure you have good ideas of your own.

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by Many_Memories04/13/15

I'm still panting!

Wish I had an older sister to make pictures with!

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by Anonymous04/13/15

Dwamn!!

Best story ive read in a long while. You didnt wait too long to get to the good stuff. It was very realistic and relatable. Please dont stop writing, for you have serious talent.

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by Anonymous04/13/15

Nice story. Looking forward to part 2 soon. All the best.

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by Anonymous04/13/15

Pretty Good

A sequel would be great and I really enjoyed your story and like someone said before me one of the best stories I've read as of lately you should keep writing!!

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by sloopb04/13/15

We need more chapters!!

A great story. A good build up to the action and a tantalizing tease of more adventures to come. Perhaps a little bondage is needed next?

Please keep writing.

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by Twixle04/13/15

Hot and believable

Love the story because of the dude's pretty realistic attitude towards everything. The sister was clearly plotting to fuck him from day one, the suggestive writing made that clear. He's dialogue and reactions to her aggressive advances seemed really believable , it was easy to imagine a guy in that situation being torn between the social taboo and the financial/sexual benefits. Also, I was glad there was no outrageous description of his cock size. If the story is about a normal dude he should have a normal cock in most cases so I was a relief to see that here.

One nit pick could be that the sister is overly keen to jump straight into sex in their first show. With him being so reluctant I thought she work up to it a little slower than she did but I guess the story paints her as an assertive nympho. Keep up the good work!

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by Eric_Shift04/13/15

Same as all who have commented already

Though I must say suggestion gets my full support.
Love a bit of bondage in there too.

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by Anonymous04/13/15

Sequel.

Yes, a sequel is needed. Possible ideas: Anal with sister. Threesome (M/F/F or M/F/Trans) with sister's "modeling" friend.

A good story.

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by Anonymous04/14/15

yes, a motherfucking sequel is needed! god damn, this is a great story.

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by Anonymous04/14/15

Fucking awesome story!

Fantastic sexy writing! More please!

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by Anonymous04/14/15

Loved It !!

More Please !!

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by Anonymous04/14/15

I rather liked it.
The idea of the couple further exploring their sexuality together is good but I really fail to see why some on here always insist on bondage and the inclusion of multiple partners.
Why cannot they expand into a loving relationship? There are far too few love brother/sister stories on here. Maybe add in that the sister only started caming after she saw her brothers add. Only using it from day one as a way to seduce him. Taking that additional month to build a small fan base so it would see more legit to him.

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by wolf18204/14/15

love it.

nice little fantasy. I've often wondered where the 'stunt cocks' in some of the cam girls' vids/rooms come from. And how extra kinky it would be if they were brother/sister. Might there be a sequel?

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by Anonymous04/15/15

Fantastic story!!

Part two coming soon?

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by Anonymous04/16/15

Great

Great story can't wait for another part

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by MattAker04/19/15

Wow

One of your hottest stories so far! Absolutely love it, and can't wait to read more. :) Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.

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by Dutchers04/23/15

Wow

Am I the only one that wants- no, needs a sequel? Absolutely incredible.

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by crazykinda04/23/15

Wow

That was so hot I am so damn wet now. More please!

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by Anonymous04/23/15

impatiently waiting

Where is Number 2 and 3. Excellent work

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by Rapier87504/28/15

Just WOW !

That was a great story, but you can't leave it there, it deserves another chapter or two.

Good story line, good characters, plenty of scope for a whole lot more.

Please !

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by Anonymous06/08/15

Wow

Chapter 2 please

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by rondell34706/19/15

More...

Marvelous presentation, not seen many stories like this hence the 5 Star.

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by Anonymous06/21/15

Landlord

I think the landlord needs to increase the rent again.

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by mazzme07/01/15

Bravo!

Outstanding and unique storyline and character build up and development. This tale had such a realistic overtone to it! All the detailed content was so well immersed in detail... such as the raw emotions and erotic sex scenes!

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by Anonymous07/20/15

WOW

I can't believe this but you have done it again. As I go down the list the stories get better and better, if that is possible ?? THANK YOU.

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by Anonymous09/03/15

So fucking sexy!!!!! Need more

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by Anonymous10/04/15

You need to write chapter 2.

Excellent story! I'm sure the next chapter will be even better. I love the fast, but definitely not rushed, buildup. Keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous10/21/15

Loved it all ,can't wait for the next chapters,😍😍

Loved it all ,can't wait for the next chapters,😍😍

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by Anonymous12/02/15

More!

Great, realy deservs anothrer chapter. Definatly more please.

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by john194602/08/16

Great fun

This was a great story. Well told.

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by Anonymous04/22/16

wow

Amazing

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by AngrySexMaster07/29/16

DEAR LORD PLEASE

PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A PART 2 TO THIS. This was an amazing story to read and I don't want but NEED more from him and Ellary

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by Vagabond6910/12/16

Wow

Great story, original and believable...

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by prop6910/17/16

I reread the story and got just as hard

Great story..what a dream

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by Anonymous12/23/16

I also vote...

for 2nd & maybe 3rd parts. Bet they'd make major cash if their audience knew they were watching incest...!!!

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