by AlinaX
I want to start by saying when I seen your story I was a little let down, Only because I had a similar Idea. Although I planned to start from a villain's view point. I enjoyed the story, for a short story it had a lot. I will say I really didn't like the end when Tony showed up. But that's just me being picky. Anyways hope it continues. Not sure if I will write mine now. Thanks
Nobody likes my endings :-(
I have seen other similar stories too, before and since writing this, but gave up trying to read them for various reasons. In my opinion, we need more, especially where it's a superhero who happens to be trans-*.
Thanks for commenting! Good luck with the writing.
A well-written story that is a light, easy read; a welcome change from the heavy, clothing affected stories that dominate this genre. I thoroughly enjoyed it, including our heroine's superpower/weakness, which I found amusing since it gets her into so much trouble! I hope there will be a sequel.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd like to write more, but I'm still waiting for inspiration to hit me...
I enjoyed this story. I wish you would continue writing stories about Sparra.
This story is nice but there are gaps... A summary of who she is & what her power set is would be nice.
More details when describing Sparta's physical form & costume. Same with Bonarra.