All Comments on 'Sparra the Futa Superhero'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Beautiful.

Beautiful.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 9 years agoAuthor

That she is - thank you kindly... :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I had a similar idea

I want to start by saying when I seen your story I was a little let down, Only because I had a similar Idea. Although I planned to start from a villain's view point. I enjoyed the story, for a short story it had a lot. I will say I really didn't like the end when Tony showed up. But that's just me being picky. Anyways hope it continues. Not sure if I will write mine now. Thanks

AlinaXAlinaXover 8 years agoAuthor

Nobody likes my endings :-(

I have seen other similar stories too, before and since writing this, but gave up trying to read them for various reasons. In my opinion, we need more, especially where it's a superhero who happens to be trans-*.

Thanks for commenting! Good luck with the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fun story!

A well-written story that is a light, easy read; a welcome change from the heavy, clothing affected stories that dominate this genre. I thoroughly enjoyed it, including our heroine's superpower/weakness, which I found amusing since it gets her into so much trouble! I hope there will be a sequel.

AlinaXAlinaXover 8 years agoAuthor

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd like to write more, but I'm still waiting for inspiration to hit me...

ChaosBreakerXChaosBreakerXalmost 5 years ago
More Please!

I enjoyed this story. I wish you would continue writing stories about Sparra.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 5 years agoAuthor

I really should...

Thanks for showing her some love. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
World building needed.

This story is nice but there are gaps... A summary of who she is & what her power set is would be nice.

More details when describing Sparta's physical form & costume. Same with Bonarra.

AlinaXAlinaXover 3 years agoAuthor

I'm sure you're right. Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

RomanceLivesRomanceLivesover 2 years ago

That was fun!! Thanks!

HiddenhavenranchHiddenhavenranchabout 1 year ago

Great stuff. Thank you!

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