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Beautiful.
Beautiful.
That she is - thank you kindly... :-)
I had a similar idea
I want to start by saying when I seen your story I was a little let down, Only because I had a similar Idea. Although I planned to start from a villain's view point. I enjoyed the story, for a short story it had a lot. I will say I really didn't like the end when Tony showed up. But that's just me being picky. Anyways hope it continues. Not sure if I will write mine now. Thanks
Nobody likes my endings :-(
I have seen other similar stories too, before and since writing this, but gave up trying to read them for various reasons. In my opinion, we need more, especially where it's a superhero who happens to be trans-*.
Thanks for commenting! Good luck with the writing.
Fun story!
A well-written story that is a light, easy read; a welcome change from the heavy, clothing affected stories that dominate this genre. I thoroughly enjoyed it, including our heroine's superpower/weakness, which I found amusing since it gets her into so much trouble! I hope there will be a sequel.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd like to write more, but I'm still waiting for inspiration to hit me...
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