Brownwood: I Dreamed Ch. 02

Keep it going

This is a very interesting story and well written. It's easy to tell you put a lot of thinking and time into it. I'll wait for the next chapter. It's a story very much worth reading.
DG Hear

2nd part

Much better than the 1st.

Certainly a good story

Well written (obviously) and gripping. Please continue.

I must say...This is a very good story...

I must say...This is a very good story...I just hope you finish it soon!!! 4* until now...I have a feeling that will be better in the end...

Please ask Zach to grow a spine....he is too easily manipulated by others

TAKE OUT THE GARBAGE AND THE TRASH

clear your mind from all the past. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hopefully he,will end up with stephanie

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Shit happens. Cheers!

Another Good Chapter

I have to agree that while Zach is a very loving and gentle father he seems to be immature as a person in general. He is full of fears and has a tendency to avoid confrontations. Of course we all hope that he stops Ty from killing Bree......

3*s

Gave the first chapter 2*s . It was mundane and predictable.

DFWBeast the other stories you have posted did you great credit. So I keep reading.
The addition of Ty earned your 3*s for this chapter. I look forward to the excitement he will provide this story.

AMerryMan

And Good Fucking Riddance!

I apologize for my gender. I don't do it, I don't know anyone who does it, but I read it here often enough that it MUST be true.

Apparently we women are constantly ordering/pushing/bribing/blackmailing you men into doing things you would just as soon not do. But you were raised to be nice boys and listen to you Mama, treat your sister right...yada yada...so you end up sitting across from the bitch that broke your heart, feeling bad that she got what she deserved.

I am always pained when I read men feeling they have to do things like this. I want to slap the women in their lives silly. It's bad enough, the stuff we take from our spouses and bosses in the name of peace/love/security, etc.. Don't take it from anyone else.

5*

Slut got what she deserved.

WOW

3 ruined lives and 2 killed babies - the woman is bad news! Run in the opposite direction!!!

Anonymouse

Why are there so many comments without user names?

Did I miss it ?

What was there that he needed to hear?

She's still an asshole

and he still needs to grow a pair. As a single parent, the only two words you need to say to albatrosses in your life are "good" and "bye."

I

Hear that Raac a comin , a rollin round the bend.
So many authors ,so few testicles remaining.

For the 1ST TIME .....

..... and "hopefully" the last it's not DFWBeast ..... IT'S DFW"CUCK"!!!

Hope it sounds as bad to YOU as it sounds to your loyal readers!

Serves Her Right!

"Damn, Zach, you're such an asshole." – HE’S an asshole? Bree acts like a cunt and shit all over him, and he’s expected to treat her nice?

“I thought you might want to know your fairytale ending wasn't the only one that turned to shit." – Yes, but he wasn’t to blame for HIS ending turning to shit, she’s got no one to blame but herself.

“I've information” – So TELL him! Why should he have to meet her?

"There wasn't any way I could've explained it to you back then without destroying us.” – And the way she DID destroy it was better? At last if she TALKED to him they MAYBE could have gotten back together, but by throwing away their engagement and slutting it up at the party there was no way back.

Further Thoughts

“Damn, how did Bozo let you get away?" – She didn’t “let” him get away, she THREW him away!

“For that matter, I rarely go out anymore." – A little late, now.

And just what did she tell him that he needed to know?

"My divorce was granted, but the pre-nup I'd signed left me with pretty much nothing after the lawyers got their fees.” – What kind of a pre-nup protects a felon with drug and abuse convictions?

Great

Great story, the author shouldn't get himself bothered by any nagative comments.

"Bree had walked out of his life... again. "

You had a misspelling there.

It should be spelled. "Bree was shoved away by him by every means he had...again."

It is a subtle error that many authors overlook. (wink)

so the nazi says

sorry to the jew and all good. this is white women to a tee, never really sorry only regret.

Yup!!

Several years on and Bree has grown up a great deal and, as adults do, acknowledges her contribution and responsibilities. Zach, also several years on, has never matured and, as spoilt little brats do, still stamps his feel and blames everyone else!! Sheesh, lawdy, lawdy fuck a duck!!

Great Story

You have got a real talent, buddy.😉😉

Nice Story

I enjoy your writing👍🏻

@bachgenbachdrwg

If it's so distressing to you as a wannabe psych pretender, why are you reading it?