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by Anonymous

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by Averygoodlay04/10/15

Liked it

No spankings or rape just a great seduction story.

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by Anonymous04/11/15

Bravo!!

Very well written, exactly my type of slow seduction!

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by Anonymous04/11/15

Great start

I was expecting someone to be watching from behind a false wall for some reason :) .... great start, keep it up!

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by Anonymous04/12/15

Step forward.

I've read a lot of your stories and have enjoyed them.

I think this is your best. The extra time you spent on character and situation development paid off in a better and sexier story.

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by happy_bloke04/12/15

Nice story

Sexy and arousing, glad she didn't shag the nasty guy. Thanks for writing.

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by Anonymous04/13/15

LIGHTS, CAMERA, ACT-SEX

Nothing missing in this story that was written.in total reality That story is true and I say this because I've done many shots of nude ladies. Some were easy to "pose" while others were more in a mode of frustration as they were doing nude shots for their husbands or lovers. One time a woman who was a working girl and marrying one of her customers. Note only did she want photos but a movie in a tub of swirling water. . .next posing in lingerie she had purchased for her wedding night. What a brothel lady she was - actually she was exceedingly lovely. Some were just not that attractive, but hey, I was making money. This story brought back wonderful stories, except none of the models were my sister.

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by Anonymous04/14/15

Can I point out that this is a rape story?

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by Anonymous04/25/15

Great story!

What a great story. I really enjoyed it, as I enjoy all of your other stories too!

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