The only question is. If the husband liked that she was and behave as a slut, why was she worried in the beginning that he could arrive and found her fucking his brother? 2*
The reason of her getting ready was not being afraid that her husband will discover. The reason is something else, the reason will open up in the coming chapters.
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Anonymous04/15/15
Wonderful as always
The plot is so nicely depicted in an erotic way, I was really lost in their lust for sex and was imagining my wife in Priyankas place . Superb the author and the story deserve 5 star ratings.My wife also read the story and praised the author.
Suresh and Aruna
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Anonymous04/18/15
we loved your work
we absolutely loved your writing
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Anonymous04/20/15
gussa
tum sabke liye likhte ho, mere ko chod ke. mere liye bhi likho na.
please na.
by
Anonymous05/01/15
Update ?
Update
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Anonymous06/28/15
wow.. the story feels like a real life event ,very awesome and realistic. esp. the narration of the thoughts and action is very vivid. awaiting the update of this 'priyanka' episode . Glad that you are writing and we are able to read your works . - Ankur
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Anonymous08/03/15
Asshole
Post ur next episode or quit writing.. asshole you need 3 months to post next part of the series ah
by
Anonymous08/31/15
the guy who commented above me
do you think your comment will inspire the guy to write further?
by
Anonymous10/28/15
stupid writer
this writer has no creativity he writes till he jerks off and after that he forgets his fantasy big time looser asshole
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Anonymous10/28/15
Loved it. No other words for it :)
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Anonymous11/09/15
Mind-blowing
Love your plot and narration. Where are the sequels dude?
What a superb story and plot. Husband asking wife if chance arise will you bed with somebody?
And that's with brother in law?
And during sex she answers his name.
Priyanka, you are like my wise brahmin wife and you too are. Ready to expand your life and cunt.
My wife also did such mission and it was ended on bed not once but many more times.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Very much natural and true to reality
Priyanka is really bold enough to express her feelings towards another male of her choice. How many Indian women get such a chance?
English
13 that's what you rad isn't it dear annony!!!
5 for your effort and because you pissed off dear annony!
The guy who made the first comment
it is never about originality of plot. It is always about how well you carry the story. For me personally, the story did the trick. ;)
5 star's. I wish I could give you more.
like
like all you guys commenting can even write an actual erotic story.
just enjoy it and keep it pleasant.
The only question is...
The only question is. If the husband liked that she was and behave as a slut, why was she worried in the beginning that he could arrive and found her fucking his brother? 2*
question by impo_60
The reason of her getting ready was not being afraid that her husband will discover. The reason is something else, the reason will open up in the coming chapters.
Wonderful as always
The plot is so nicely depicted in an erotic way, I was really lost in their lust for sex and was imagining my wife in Priyankas place . Superb the author and the story deserve 5 star ratings.My wife also read the story and praised the author.
Suresh and Aruna
we loved your work
we absolutely loved your writing
gussa
tum sabke liye likhte ho, mere ko chod ke. mere liye bhi likho na.
please na.
Update ?
Update
wow.. the story feels like a real life event ,very awesome and realistic. esp. the narration of the thoughts and action is very vivid. awaiting the update of this 'priyanka' episode . Glad that you are writing and we are able to read your works . - Ankur
Asshole
Post ur next episode or quit writing.. asshole you need 3 months to post next part of the series ah
the guy who commented above me
do you think your comment will inspire the guy to write further?
stupid writer
this writer has no creativity he writes till he jerks off and after that he forgets his fantasy big time looser asshole
Loved it. No other words for it :)
Mind-blowing
Love your plot and narration. Where are the sequels dude?
This garbage stinks !
The worst on this site ! "1*" !!
1*
for bonnie/vastie.
WOW
i wish it was longer, but this was a great read..... thank you
Wise brahmin wives
What a superb story and plot. Husband asking wife if chance arise will you bed with somebody?
And that's with brother in law?
And during sex she answers his name.
Priyanka, you are like my wise brahmin wife and you too are. Ready to expand your life and cunt.
My wife also did such mission and it was ended on bed not once but many more times.
Very much natural and true to reality
Priyanka is really bold enough to express her feelings towards another male of her choice. How many Indian women get such a chance?
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