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Have we not already seen this?
Oops!
I think the gremlins got you!!!
Chapeters
8 and 9 are the same story.
Repeat, but with much better Editing
It's a repeat of Part 8, but I will say that it's cleaned up pretty well.
Story Line
Love the work you are doing, please continue.. Impatiently waiting for the next champter
anticipation
this series is a great story and I eagerly await every chapter like everyday..... please!
of vs off
Please have someone who is fluent in English explain to you the difference between the words "of" and "off". Then have someone help you re-edit and re-post chapters 7, 8 and 9. Please, please, please don't blindly continue to screw up what was one of the best stories on Literotica.
sigh!!
Editing a chapter doesn't make it a new chapter. It is a rewrite.
I love the work, but the administration gymnastics are hard to take.
it the same work
Ch.9 is the same thing of Ch.8 you may have got the spelling done right but its still a re-write and the of and off isn't the same get a proof reader he'll read it and point out what you did and were to fix it
Brilliant Story!
A terrific story teller! The story is a little awkward due to the misuse of words. If English is a second language use literotica to find someone to edit your work. The story overall is well written and interesting. Looking forward to more of your writing.
You need to repost Pt.09
Pt.08 starts out as Chapter 35 and pt.10 starts as Chapter 37 so my guess is you tried to do some editing clean up on pt 08 and it got posted to pt. 09. Can you please repost Pt 09 Chapter 36
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