i enjoyed it so far.. many avemues to explore here and i did not miss the fact of your knoledge of super market moms period , so i know that will be told of at some point. 4
I keep seeing Nick Nolte in "DOWN AND OUT IN BEVERLY HILLS".
Down and out in Beverly Hills. This isnt plagiarized is it?
Good beginning. He's got three ladies he can bang in the household. The ultimate will be the snooty bitch, Mrs. Klugman! 5 *'s
Cannot wait for you to write about the next chapter. Good back story keep up with the juicy details.
Youre a damn good writer.
For the read.
You write good. And I read good many!
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i enjoyed it so far.. many avemues to explore here and i did not miss the fact of your knoledge of super market moms period , so i know that will be told of at some point.
4
Begs continuation.
I keep seeing Nick Nolte in "DOWN AND OUT IN BEVERLY HILLS".
i agree
Down and out in Beverly Hills. This isnt plagiarized is it?
Muy bueno!
Good beginning. He's got three ladies he can bang in the household. The ultimate will be the snooty bitch, Mrs. Klugman! 5 *'s
loved it
Cannot wait for you to write about the next chapter. Good back story keep up with the juicy details.
5 stars
Youre a damn good writer.
Thanks***
For the read.
good
You write good. And I read good many!
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