All Comments on 'The Weekend Pt. 01'

Wonderful story and so well written....love the slow build up and the erotic desires...

A lovely romance, just the way I like them. Bravo!

I like reading about two fine looking women.

luv the story,n the buildup to the sex act..

Nice,looking forward to more stories

Thank you so much for all the wonderful feedback. I will be posting part 2 as soon as possible.

So good and erotic!

Thank you!

L

Isn't it delicious when two best friends, who admire and trust each

other, become lovers. Mmmmmm, loved the story. Looking forward

to next installment. :)

A very good story and very well written. I look forward to more.

Hi all,

Please, if you like this story, let me know. If you don't, let me know why. And please rate it.

Hugs

BiGrrl

it's great story <3<3

beautifully written,would love to read more of their saga

Hi all,

Thanks again for all the wonderful votes and lovely comments. Just to let you all know, chapter 2 of this story is underway, and I'm also working on another Claire and Fiona story.

BiGrrl

xxxx

Engaging story....we'll written with developed characters.

wow

great story

cannot wait to read chapter 2

The wife and I lived this wonderful story and are eagerly waiting in anticipation for the continuations!!

Lovely story, simple yet erotic, had my knickers flooded hehe x

Permanent state for you Kimmy. x

A fun story but sadly, it just came to an abrupt stop. The miraculous appearance of Part 2 would please your readers very much, I'm sure BiGrrl. Regarding your heroines' bra sizes, I think that in the long run Fiona would be happier with her 34B than 38DD---I've heard that very large breasts can become more than uncomfortable over time. Can't fault the quality of your writing or the erotica, so five well-earned stars.

Hi thankyou for posting really really enjoyed it and looking forward to part two if you do :)

Reading this makes me think of being there. So palpable, so engaging, .looking forward to more

I hope there is a part 2 coming soon, I am just wondering what the husband would think if he knew he upgraded their suite to the honeymoon suite, that would be funny to read if his wife told him

Too bad there hasn't been a chapter two. This is good.

This is so well written and the characters are so endearing. You can't just let it end there. Please continue so we can all read of these two wonderful ladies and, hopefully, how they end up together. Thank you very much for sharing this.

Greg

... of sexual attraction and especially the pussylicking! My first time licking a woman's pussy, I was kneeling on the floor like that, next to the bed. When she came I blew my load on the floor - I hadn't even touched myself.

I suspect, since husband Brian upgraded their suite and prepaid it, that he hoped this would happen! Kudos to Brian.

My comment on your other story applies just as well to this one. - Gill.

PS - Your photo says you are a lovely lady.