All Comments on 'Fiery Temptress Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
you forgot

Great story just remember both can't be on hands and knees at the same time while one is on their back. You FUCKING DUMB FUCK.

Ducky7Ducky7almost 9 years ago
MORE MORE MORE

Personal trainers just love to be in control. This one also knows the rule "No pain no gain"

WitchfanWitchfanalmost 9 years ago
Congratulations

Nice beginnings and hope to see more. Don't listen to the coward earlier that probably can't write anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Rock hard asses are shit. Tongue sticking out while in pleasure? While it is an excellent story and situation is close to my own reality but still the writer is clearly a Virgin or doesn't know what he's missing out. The tongue thing is adopted from Japanese hentai which is also shit. Girls don't do that. Back on the topic of rock hard butts, that's just for girls with flat asses who squat every day to change the shape. Natural bubble butts is what you want. Soft > hard. Male = hard, female = soft.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Keep going

Do not listen to critics. They're just jealous of you. Do more stories soon

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