Very good first story effort. The story has real promise, very interested what happens next
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Anonymous04/18/15
Great story
This Story is so lovely.
I will read the further chapters with interest.
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Anonymous04/19/15
Ignore the ID10T comments
If the majority of the idiots who comment on every little thing continue, then most of us will go elsewhere, just ignore them in fact don't even read them, if they can't even sign their own ID, regards RR101
English
Excellent.
Nice, could even be a true story?
Very good first story effort. The story has real promise, very interested what happens next
Great story
This Story is so lovely.
I will read the further chapters with interest.
Ignore the ID10T comments
If the majority of the idiots who comment on every little thing continue, then most of us will go elsewhere, just ignore them in fact don't even read them, if they can't even sign their own ID, regards RR101
very good
More please
Good start!
Very arousing and vivid descriptions. You've got real talent. I can't wait to read more.
More
Please please please add more. I love it already
Oh dear lord this was hot
It got me dripping
Hot!
I like this a lot. Not loads of sex but still very erotic. Thanks!
excellent stuff!
This author must be one of the most talented literotica contributors. Totally arousing!
More, please.
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