All Comments on 'Raped!...The Final Chapter'

Great story line. A bit short on the details of the wives' bodies. What about the feelings of Matt as he came?

Just a thought,

Did they live happily ever after?

Seem like a nice male fantasy... though knowing reality 6 wives under one roof can morph into a bloody nightmare... wonder's what it is like if all 6 wives give old Matt the cold couch for a week! Hehehe... Nice story writting though, keep up your work.

Nice story. had me hooked till the end. maybe a follow up story on how they managed 2 live afterwards, and wat happened 2 the kids.

Thanks 4 the enjoyable reading. Get an A+ for effort and imagination. :)

i love to read and re read these chapters of matt and his wifes they are so erotic and make me feel as if im there at times

I want to join the family and be a sex slave and be raped repeatedly and have sex with other women. Awesome story! -Dana

A truly wonderful and awesome story that grabs your attention right away!

Adding a little anal action would be nice.

I liked the plot. Pretty well written.

OTHER WOMEN...THE ENDING IS WRONG...THEY SHOULD LEAVE HIM AND SUE FOR CHILD SUPPORT.LEAVE CHRISTIE AND ASHLEY AND KAREN THERE WITH HIM AND ALL THE CHILDREN. WRITE A BOOK TELLING ABOUT THE RAPES...WARNING THE PUBLIC THAT HE WASN'T PLANNING ON STOPPING HIS RAPES.

I'm a guy, and I appreciate the view of this story. Anyone who didn't see the love developing is blind. it goes to both sexes primal passions, and is a 'fetish' borneof Hundreds of thousands of years. It is a difficult thing for morality police to control our urges for.

-Well Done Christie

I love stories with men making women pregnant on purpose, and even forced pregnancy. I've been searching for months for these types of stories. I would love to see more! Your stories are so hot in this respect and with really great structure. I could see one of those female characters being me. I loved being pregnant and the stories remind me of how good it felt to get pregnant!

I've always been turned on by the very idea of being impregnated, I loved the series as the main characters feelings of the "animal mating" completely reflect my own!! this series was very well written, though my only complainat is the jump between the story of the first two sisters and the addition of the four girls. I honestly thought i was reading a new series while i read "Breeding Time". Thanks for the great stories though, ill be waiting for more.

Omg!!!! I Looove your stories!!!!! Soooo fckn hot!!!!! The thing that I love the most and have noticed is that the guy fcks the girl more than once:d sooooooo yummy!!! Please continue writing!!:)

Imaginative and erotic. Great work.

I absolutely love reading your stories. I love the forced breeding. I love the multiple wives. Would love to see more from you. The only thing missing here for me is incest.

Fantastic conclusion, love the rape & forced breeding & agree with other responder that incest woulda be the icing on the cake!

What happened to the 4th and 5th installments of this series? They disappeared of the list and I really miss reading them. I love all your stories and series please write more! Your the best erotica author that I've ever read. So addicted to your stuff.

I'm not sure what happened to the other chapters, but you seem to be missing some. The series was a great read, hit all the right buttons for me, it just feels incomplete as I never got a chance to read the other missing chapters. :(

I really loved this story but the chapters were named so that you could not tell at a glance which order they were in and it really seamed disjointed and missing chapters... it also seemed to be missing a first chapter.

You are an amazing writer....I really wish you'd write more for this series. They were all a great read. Thank you for the wonderful stories!!

To those complaining of the missing chapters, the full story is available here: http://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/24/raped.txt