Interesting start to the story and I like that it will be a multi-part. Really love how your dirty mind works. I hope you can keep the racial humiliation dialogue going. I think it's definitely the best part. Keep up the awesome content!
Another excellent writing by one of the best, kinkiest, mostly submissive writers on this site. Keep up the good works. I can't wait to read the next Chapter.
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Anonymous04/14/15
wow
There aren't many stories about Hispanic women out there and I'm really interested to see where this is going. Hope the racial talk continues in future chapters because as a Hispanic man that is hot.
Thank you for the taking the time to put our history and fantasies into an amazing story. You were amazing through the whole process and I hope everyone enjoys this first chapter because it is true and I can't wait to see what everyone thinks of our fantasies to come ;). Thank you again you are an amazing writer and gave life to our story better than I ever could. Thank you and I can't wait till your readers see what is in store for us.
This could end up being the hottest story on this site!
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Anonymous04/17/15
Amazing
As a Black and Hispanic couple the title caught my attention and the story got both of us off. This could be the greatest story ever told and I can't wait to see her Dominated again.
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Anonymous04/21/15
cant wait for chapter 2!!
how did it fell apart i mean fall apart?! vaugh came back? someone found out...? im not reading anymore literotica until this fugging come out. !!!! no more literotica til may (i hav to leave the page open on my browser)
WRITE QUICKER . CANT WAIT!
Love your stories but this one is a little tame. My normal rating of 5 could only be a 3. Not easy to write so often and keep to your normal excellent standard..
English
A little different for you
I really enjoyed this and am curious where you plan to go with it.
Excellent theme!
Interesting start to the story and I like that it will be a multi-part. Really love how your dirty mind works. I hope you can keep the racial humiliation dialogue going. I think it's definitely the best part. Keep up the awesome content!
Another Kinky, Erotic, Submission Masterpiece
Another excellent writing by one of the best, kinkiest, mostly submissive writers on this site. Keep up the good works. I can't wait to read the next Chapter.
wow
There aren't many stories about Hispanic women out there and I'm really interested to see where this is going. Hope the racial talk continues in future chapters because as a Hispanic man that is hot.
Thank You
Thank you for the taking the time to put our history and fantasies into an amazing story. You were amazing through the whole process and I hope everyone enjoys this first chapter because it is true and I can't wait to see what everyone thinks of our fantasies to come ;). Thank you again you are an amazing writer and gave life to our story better than I ever could. Thank you and I can't wait till your readers see what is in store for us.
Amazing
This could end up being the hottest story on this site!
Amazing
As a Black and Hispanic couple the title caught my attention and the story got both of us off. This could be the greatest story ever told and I can't wait to see her Dominated again.
cant wait for chapter 2!!
how did it fell apart i mean fall apart?! vaugh came back? someone found out...? im not reading anymore literotica until this fugging come out. !!!! no more literotica til may (i hav to leave the page open on my browser)
WRITE QUICKER . CANT WAIT!
When will we see the sequel?
Great story. It needs another chapter! Bad! Don't disappoint us or leave us hanging!
Amazing!
One of the best stories of yours I've read, can't wait for the sequel!
Love your stories but this one is a little tame. My normal rating of 5 could only be a 3. Not easy to write so often and keep to your normal excellent standard..
I'm hooked, ready for next chapter
Glad I didn't read this until 2016 so I can go to the next installment. You are so kinky, that's why I love your writing.
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