by wishfulthinking
I absolutely loved this story. I was hoping you would continue it and I'm so glad you did. ^_^
Delighted you are continuing this story - it very much caught my attention when I read the first chapter. Glad to see you are back writing here, it is always a treat to read one of your stories.
What a sweet surprise to see your story posted here today. Thank you for the gift of your writing once again - you have been missed!
You have definitely been missed---were you publishing somewhere else?
Well worth the wait, but pretty please don't make us wait so long for the next!
So pleased to see your name in the New stories. Been ages since I visited and here's one of favs with a wee tib bit.
Wonderful! More more more :-)
No pressure.
I really appreciate the effort <3 LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO GOOD EVEN IF ITS NOT EROTIC !!
Please oh please oh please don't go away again! I'll be dead and buried before you're finished at the rate of one chapter every 5yrs. Seriously though you are one of my favorite authors here and I need more of your delicious writing.
This is another of your great stories. Please continue and finish!
So glad you picked back up with Melanthe! You are an incredible writer and I absolutely LOVE your stories!
love this story i come back to see uodates . please continue
I've been reading through your collection, and this world and these people intrigue me so much! I feel like there's so much more here, and I can't wait to read it...so get on with it already :) PLEASE!!
Okay, so, the story line is wonderful. The grammar is not. Please find someone to read it for you before you post it. This one was much better than the first one. Are you going to continue? If you do, I will edit it. Contact me- kerrynesbitt@live.com
Hope you continue the story. It's intriguing and beguiling on so many levels.
I've read the two chapters over 10 times. I really love it. Please write more chapters!
Please Please Please continue this.
Powerful , erotic and a great story line waiting to be explored.