All Comments on ''Taking Care of Business' With Son'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yummy!

Short and Sweet,

Thanks!

bobenjoys183bobenjoys183about 9 years ago
Loved it

I hope there is more to cum...

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 9 years ago

Short but hot. Looking forward to (and hoping for) the next chapter.

Danno_61455Danno_61455about 9 years ago
A FINE PIECE OF FICTION

Not sure all guys are so open with their mother as to pre-warn her of their intent to spank the monkey, but you made it interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more

what happen next ? hot

JacobEmetJacobEmetabout 9 years ago
Well done

Great work. Loved the pacing. And nice style.

ironmoose007ironmoose007about 9 years ago
more please!

Very good writing , and VERY hot! I am looking forward to the rest of the vacation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More!

I hope there is more tomorrow ...

max052max052about 9 years ago
Loved it!

A first class story with plenty of potential. Hope to see more of the other characters mentioned get involved. You can go a long way with what you started with. You keep writing, I'll keep reading. 5 stars and fave story.

Best regards, max052

always_have_a_hard_onealways_have_a_hard_oneabout 9 years ago
great story.

would u have sex with him and if so would u fuck him every time you see him? what percentage of older women want to fuck younger men in your opinion?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice

Nice work..great work..More

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting story

Realistic situation. Usually son tries to take care of business without mom knowing. Seeing son jo is a big thrill for many women.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
perhaps, if there is more

we can learn at least a little about these two people.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
I am so happy for mom

She was able to reach her peak over and over again during this short story. Did seeing her son stroking himself have anything to do with it?

If she had peeked over to see what he was doing, her interest might have been piqued by his brazen behaviour.

ohiorobertohiorobertabout 9 years ago
wow

awesome story......tell us about the rest of your vacation

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
an excellent first-time story

And it brings up a topic that's strangely neglected on Lit. A mature woman like the mother has needs between her legs, needs she has to attend to. A boy like Derrick sure as fuck has needs between his own legs. At his age he's a semen producing machine, his young balls never quit, and he's got to shoot his semen like all the time. Lots and lots of mothers and sons are in the same situation. Why oh why don't they do what Derrick and his mom do, the obvious common-sensical thing, and take care of their needs together? They have the closest human connection possible, that of a mother and her male child. They love each other to pieces. There's no awkwardness or false modesty between them. Each jacks off in secret, but each knows that it's way way better to do it in the company of the person they love the most in the world. That way a boy like Derrick gets some great views of the wonderful hairy hole he came out of, as mom strums her cunt. And a mother like Derrick's mom sees what her boy's got jumping around in his pants, his fat young cock. She hasn't seen it since he was maybe 10 or so, and, like Derrick's mother, she's bowled over by how fucking big it's grown. A big fat mommy-pleaser. Mom cums like crazy as her boy blows his young balls and splatters his semen all over the place. Then they go on to discover the absolutely perfect place for the kid to shoot his sperm.

daddy1950daddy1950about 9 years ago
Needs a sequel.

Enjoyed it, but was it essential his dick was a mini Empire State building? Surely, just the exposure of her son's cock being wanked would have been sufficient to arouse her.

mike1960mike1960about 9 years ago
fun start

i would enjoy reading a follow up to this story perhaps a bit of moms family history with incest between her and her father and her being seduced by her brother

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Hot Hot Hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hot mama

I liked that they masturbated together but didn't get more involved. It was very sexy as is.

the_naked_onethe_naked_onealmost 9 years agoAuthor
Glad you guys liked it!

I hope you got even close to as excited reading it as I did writing it! It's going to take me a little time, but there are definitely some follow-ups on the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
sexy as fuck

Now what I'm supposed to do with this gigantic hard on you have gave me? lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More to cum

surely there will be more than dual masterbating before the vacation is over

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
very good

good story but to short at only one page

keep going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
My favorite stories are mother son

I have just rubbed my self off for the 4th time today and eaten my cum dreaming if mothers hand on my cock thanks

4yourpleasureiam

Mummiesboy1976Mummiesboy1976almost 8 years ago
Cum for mum

Hot, I'd love to cum in front of my mum. To look her in the eye as as I exposed my cock to her and shoot my load or creampie the hairy hole I came from.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Carry on

Please carry on this story, such a great start

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Toooooooo Short

Enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Very, very sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WOW

OMG. That was so hot... You have to write more... I need to know what happens next..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Begging you

Please please blow him... clearly, slowly. Tell us everything!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot

OMG that was so hot it brought back memeries of me catching my mom masturbting. I caught her on numerous occasions then when I turned 18 she admitted she knew I was watching and it made her very wet before the always on cuming orgasams she always had. I would go to my room and jerk until I shot a load of cum. We now masturbate together I want to make love with her but she won't cross that line. Maybe one day, fingers crossed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My Mom

I loved this story. It got me so hard. I would love to masturbate with my mom.

I would have to eat and lick her pussy too. I can just imagine. Then do

The same thing a couple of times a week. Loved masturbating with my

X wife. I absolutely cum buckets reading these mom and son stories.

Love to be alone in my bed room reading them with my cock hard

Giving me my tasty pre cum while i read these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Incest

Great story!!!between the ages of 16-18 me and my mom regularly masterbated together.she never let me have sex with her but,we had many orgasms together

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What an incredible story. I had my mother watch me masturbate me when I was almost 40 and she was 62 or so. It is a strange fetish but After almost a year of conversations, she agreed to watch. I promised only once and delivered on that promise but I can tell you that it was the most exciting day of my life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

lovely possible true stuff

OseekerOseeker12 months ago

Awww...

Sharing an intimate few minutes...

Very sexy!

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