All Comments on 'Tales of Dirty Old Man Ch. 17'

BTW your editor has let you down a few times: "a very large bathroom with a walking shower", a 'gentile' is a person who is not a jew, 'provenance' not 'provenience'.

***** nevertheless

I am so very sorry that you lost your mother. If it takes time for you to write, take your time.

So sorry for your loss but very happy to welcome you back. All the simple minded editors out there should shut up and try writing their own stories. Best wishes

Sir,

You are either an exceedingly talented writer or your story contains much more truth in it than you own to.

I wish I could purvey the depth of emotion in my stories that you managed to express in sections of this one.

Well done, and please accept my condolences at your recent loss.

Tom D

As an old (84) dirty old man I do so enjoy your story. Like others I would have liked to be part of the family.

I'm so sorry for your loss...

I hope you keep on writing for us.

What a wonderful Series! Please keep the installments coming.! 5A

Still as riveting as line one of Ch 1, if not more so.

I am totally wrapped up in this and I don't want it to end, which is an accolade to the writing.

Okay there have been the odd mistake, but we are familiar with the characters to forgive.