Liked the tone...the humor...all of it!!! Waiting for part 2 and 3 when he gets her ass and her mother...and her ass too..LOL!!!
by
Anonymous04/20/15
Moar!!
This was great, can't wait to see future installments. Let's see the lead taking her ass then her mothers. It be nice to close it out with one or both of them ending up or making it a competition to see who gets pregnant first
You have left out some important details brother. Top down (car) and bent over the back seat worth every penny, what year and model. Randy Newman's song,"crusin down Imperial Hwy big nasty red head at my side, we were born to ride".
by
Anonymous11/12/15
Nice Story
Good pacing, good leadup, Interesting Characters.
Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous12/07/15
allenthebrit
Both myself and Beulah really enjoyed this, the humour and the sexy bits, up to your usual standard, we just hope that mum gets well fucked too.
But a bit quick..... know the cougars out there move fast but hummmm..... Monica??? and carried it for two years?? Then gave it up after a couple of hours....
English
Yes! More please.
Enjoyed this story very much. You have piqued my interest as to where this storyline could go in the future. Looking forward to more.
Keep it going you got my attention
The best fantasy
Keep it up I had a great time reading this. I hope that mom gets involved soon.
5 stars !!!!!!!!!!
Great start to a new series. I'm so excited about all the new ones you're righting these days.
great
Very nicely done. Light yet hot to keep readers interested
A WINNER!
Liked the tone...the humor...all of it!!! Waiting for part 2 and 3 when he gets her ass and her mother...and her ass too..LOL!!!
Moar!!
This was great, can't wait to see future installments. Let's see the lead taking her ass then her mothers. It be nice to close it out with one or both of them ending up or making it a competition to see who gets pregnant first
the best
I do think you have a very good story going please continue with it I what to see what the others will be like
GREAT!
This was hilarious and hot at the same time, unexpectedly brilliant! It sounds like you were having as much fun writing as we were reading.
More please!
Loved the characters, loved the story. Leaves me rock hard and wanting more!
YES!
Great story. Will be reading all of this series. Keep writing!
Buick convertible !
You have left out some important details brother. Top down (car) and bent over the back seat worth every penny, what year and model. Randy Newman's song,"crusin down Imperial Hwy big nasty red head at my side, we were born to ride".
Nice Story
Good pacing, good leadup, Interesting Characters.
Keep up the good work.
allenthebrit
Both myself and Beulah really enjoyed this, the humour and the sexy bits, up to your usual standard, we just hope that mum gets well fucked too.
Loved it. Very hot. The sex was great and the possibility of a mother/daughter threesome, awesome!!
Hot Start!
"They all wanted to know if her breasts were as soft as they appeared to be, but I don't motorboat and tell." Lol.
I'm liking the series very much so far.
Good Story
But a bit quick..... know the cougars out there move fast but hummmm..... Monica??? and carried it for two years?? Then gave it up after a couple of hours....
Hotness!
Monica seems to be the sexual soul that most women or young ladies suppress way too long to let escape..."youth is often times wasted on the young."
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to She Hates Me? Not! Pt. 01: Monica or
More submissions by ilikeithot6308.