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by MicheleRC

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skankabouttownskankabouttownabout 9 years ago
Great rhythm

I enjoyed it! The short and punchy stanzas built a great rhythm and enjoyed the repetitions to build emphasis ;)

demure101demure101about 9 years ago
Nicely done -

A good picture and well written!

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