All Comments on 'Outside Shower Show'

by Lia Monde

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thebuffalothebuffaloabout 9 years ago

The story isn't my cup of tea, but the writing is quite good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wonderful story and well written

What a great erotic story filled with passion! You really captured that moment beautifully!

Peeperguy29Peeperguy29about 9 years ago
Terrific

Story was very well written and very erotic . Kudos 😀

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Gorgeous!

I think that single word covers it all...nicely done! 5 stars.

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