All Comments on 'Controller Ch. 04'

I just hope Nate doesn't hurt Eli, he's compassionate, loving, adorable and desperately wants to be loved by Nate. Hopefully Nate will be smart enough to recognize what he has in him.

You are absolutely one of my favorite writers & I adore your stories. However I feel a disconnect with these characters yet I remain hopeful that it will change.

Like the other commenter, I like your stories, but I'm not quite getting into these characters - too much emphasis on the sex, I think, not enough character development?

Hysterical exchange between Eli and the waiter at the pizza joint.

You have to have one amazing sense of humor to add such incredible comic relief to your stories!

I love Eli and Nate together, just wish Nate liked Eli the way Eli likes him