by Irrationality_
The title says it all about your article for Good House Keeper. This story belongs in the kiddy section, as such I gave it a one star rating. Time to play with your prayer beads or read your Sunday School text.
This probably should have been in the Non-Erotic category. Subsequent chapters could be filed elsewhere if they have erotic content.
Why is this story in the first time section? Is this the first time this guys house has ever been cleaned? Because that's horrifying...