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A Fine Balancing Act

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/20/15

pathetic

banal

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by LitCrit04/20/15

Amatuerish

Very ham-handed and immature - no-one is THAT naïve and unaware any longer and no practiced seducer would be that clumsy - I'm sure a pregnant team member would unbalance his formations even more.

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by Anonymous04/20/15

Rather amusing actually. I think some critics take it all a too seriously.

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by Anonymous04/21/15

It's a fantasy guys...

..., one I wouldn't mind having myself. Thanks for the inspiration.

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by Anonymous04/22/15

wut

A university student who doesn't know about sex? One who is also naive enough to believe this?

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by Anonymous04/22/15

Hinting at pedophilia

If they claim 18 but she doesn't know about sex, the author is picturing her to be ten or twelve.

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by Anonymous05/23/16

Continue please!!!

Please write another chapter! I want to know what will happen next?

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by Anonymous12/08/16

lol

Oh my god that was hilarious, thank you!

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